°°Soulmates°°

Your soul along with mine...

Why is this life 

Only for a moment 

When this relationship

Needs decades... 

So shall I ask God

For a new excuse 

I want to stay with you 

Don't want to be away 

Cause you are my soulmate.... 

You are my soulmate... 

So delightful is this feeling 

Cause you are my soulmate... 

Your smiles are my strength 

Only these offer me hope 

Your heart beat recites my life 

Your wishes are my prayers now 

Cause you are my soulmate... 

You are my soulmate...

How unique is this feeling 

Two souls are one now 

Life has become beautiful 

You are my soulmate now... 

You are my soulmate now...

I will always be yours 

Wherever I may be 

It's a promise 

Even if death takes me away, 

Cause you are my soulmate 

And my only soulmate...........

Author's Note

Well, just can't do better at the moment...
I hope this reaches your heart!!!
Thank you for reading... : )

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is a beautifully written celebration of a true & lasting friendship. Frankly, I think the word "soulmate" is overused to the point where it isn't very meaningful. But your poem adds plenty of rich details to show us what you mean & what the relationship is like. I wonder if the word "renounce" is the right one for that meaning? It seems opposite to the rest of your message. Other than those two little issues, I think the rest of your poem is smooth, with feelings of much affection.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much for the honest review... much appreciated...

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

wow it's like song dedicated for the soulmate. The picture is awesome at the start and so does your words too. Great work :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you for the sweet words...

[zaisham9393]

I loved this poem.Good work :)!

[Anindita Janhabee]

I'm glad you liked it!!! : )

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

This is a beautiful poem. I love the way that it flows!!!

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much!!!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're most welcome!

[Nwang]

This is good. Absolutely loved this writing, its like lyrics of a song. Brilliantly done. One of your finest works.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot dear....
my Buddhist friend....
I'm glad you liked this piece of mine...and yeah I wrote it for the special one... : )

[Nwang]

Pleasure is all mine my lady. I hope your special one gets to read this, and gets to know how special he/she really is that they had a poem written for them.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Oh... so sweet... yep... he's so happy reading this that he didn't even get words to review this... so he just managed some whistles over here ... hahahaha : )

[Nwang]

The guy who whistled at the end of @Ria's review. He must be in cloud no. 9.
Anyone would be impressed if they read how heartfelt it is.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Yes you got me right my friend...
I'm so lucky indeed finding him ..

[Nwang]

I think he is lucky....

[Anindita Janhabee]

I am lucky indeed....

[Nwang]

Haha....I agree.

[Lord Sarthak]

Arre dono lucky hai

[Nwang]

Haha.....tum dono bahut lucky ho. Kisi ki nazar na lagey ;P

[Anindita Janhabee]

oh gosh!!!
hahahahaha : )

[Bala Gorthi]

A good one Anandita, for a soul mate.
We feel filled, we feel full with them.
I loved these lines: Your smiles are my strength
Only these offer me hope
Your wishes are my prayers now
I will always be yours
Wherever I may be
It's a promise
Even if death takes me away,
All these verses exactly convey how we feel when we find and become one with our soul mate.
Thanks for sharing it. Keep sharing. :-):-):-)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you once again dear writer.... Yes, you got it exactly... I'm glad for that...
I assure I'll be reading urs very soon...

[Ardra]

sweet poem ... just like you
Your smiles are my strength
Only these offer me hope
Your heart beat renounces my life
Your wishes are my prayers now
Cause you are my soulmate...
beautiful lines..

[Anindita Janhabee]

thank you so much Ria ... So kind and interesting words by you ...

[Lord Sarthak]

whistlesssss