If it was everything

just dive into emotions...

Wasn't it care
When I was shaken
As you told me
About your leg that was broken..
Wasn't it affection
When my hands ran over your face
As you told me about the picture
That you wanted to trace..
Wasn't it happiness
When I smiled from my heart
At the tulip you gifted me
Telling me we wouldn't be apart..
Wasn't it sweetness
When you made me eat
That heart shaped chocolate
As I cried for the rude treat..
Wasn't it anger
When you told me to get away
Because I asked you questions
You did in a rude way..
Wasn't it hate
When you threw me out
From your place called heart
As I did sob and also shout..
Was it fair
To Show all that rudeness
Going with someone else
Leaving me all alone........

Author's Note

Last paragraph doesn't rhyme.. sorry, can't do any better at the moment..
but hope you liked it...
feel free sharing your views.... thanks for the read.... : )

Reviews

[Ashish]

"Wasn't it hate
When you threw me out
From your place called heart
As I did sob and also shout.. "

It's very rude dear....
Don't know what to tell in this context..

But really an emotional write..

[Anindita Janhabee]

Yes... truly...
nd thnk u ...

[Nwang]

Sometimes love can be magic, but magic can just be an illusion.
Nice potrayle of feelings. Love reading your poetry.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you once again dear.. glad u liked it... very true ... magic and illusion..