Lost somewhere...

just lost...

After millons of prayers
She found him
And he found her
After long waiting years...
Their friendship grew
Into something strong
Being honest to themselves
They were quite true...
Sharing jokes and smiles
And also secrets
They didn't even notice
Their conversation till miles...
Oh what a pleasure she got
Even not by her side
He too experienced the same
But a bit different he thought...
Even being distant
They were close
Even being opposites
They did attract...
He wrote her poetry so beautiful
And she lived in it thankfully
Being so much a lovely couple
Painted him a picture so colourful...
Whatever came along
They faced with courage
They had forgotten their past
And composed their own song...
So enchanting was their relation
Untouched yet charming
Comfortable and caring
Beyond words and limitation...
Not even the distance mattered
But someone returned back to him
Leaving her heart
Completely shattered...
Alone in her thoughts
All night keeps sobbing
Just like on a plain paper
Sudden ink blots...
She still waits for him to come back
And erase the incompleteness in her
As her life has become colourless
Undergoing huge crack...

Author's Note

Every first and fourth line rhymes...
just feel the emotions within...
wrote it just in few minutes, I hope this could lead you to some sort of sadness, some tears may be.....
thanks for the visit though..

Reviews

[Ashish]

"She still waits for him to come back
And erase the incompleteness in her
As her life has become colorless
Undergoing huge crack..."

Again Ani! I can't comment upon this...the sadness in your poem & words completely depicting your heart's picture..

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank u dear...
Glad you could picturise my heart...

[D Connolly]

Once again, Anindita, beautiful writing. It is lovely in the beginning like so many loves are, and towards the end, very sad. Keep writing!

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much ma'am for your time...

[Bala Gorthi]

A beautiful write Anindita.. A story with a sad ending. Heart becomes heavy. It feels beautiful in the journey of friendship and when it turns into love it becomes even more beautiful.. But with one stroke when such bond is broken the pain is at its epitome for the girl having lost both lover and friendship..
It seems injustice to see the other enjoying while one is in shattered state..
Very touching piece leaving the readers sad and wishing better things for the girl..
You have poured beauty and emotions very well in the poem. Well done!

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much for your generous review... You always make me happy with your words sir .. thank you very much...

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Very emotional, starting beautiful with great descriptions, which continued, down to the tragic ending of loneliness. You held me in from beginning to end. Liked the way you composed it, so to make reader feel emotions. Great write!

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot for your time reading...

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're very welcome.

[Sudeep Mishra]

Beautiful. Keep it up and keep writing.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much dear...!!!

[Manisha]

this poem has a lovely flow......very nice job
this is a pour out of deep emotions expressed true and in honest words....
GREAT WORK....

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you Mani....

[Giulia King]

wow I love this poem! You have captured everything so beautifully! From happiness to pure sadness. My heart broke when I read the last piece of them not being together anymore. When a person walks into someones life you see new colors and when they suddenly walk away, everything turns grey and sad.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Yes..so true...
thanks a lot dear for your charming words and warm visit...

[genalyn caguimbal]

I feel like I'm the main character in this poem. 😥💔💔💔😔

[Anindita Janhabee]

Don't be sad... many can relate to this....
Just get up and fight... till your last breath... till when someone else will come and write such a poem for you!!!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

A pain in your words and a lot of sadness in your heart. Well what you can expect in love after all???
That's why being a free flying bird is always a great joy in life....

Let go, Live free!

[Anindita Janhabee]

Oh dear... thank you so much for your warm read... May be... you are right...
And yes, a free bird is always joyous.... because.... all that matters is friendship...

[Anindita Janhabee]

Where are you from ?

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Sky & that's why I'm a "Skyfall" lol....

[Anindita Janhabee]

That's quite interesting...
And that's alright if you want to keep it a secret... Secrets are sometimes good...

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Too good! Not just good :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Try this https://youtu.be/Ch99RI8DvUI it will help you to recover fast from the sick lovefall lol

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Music & Writing keeps me alive all the time! Maybe it can help you too..

[Anindita Janhabee]

thank you so much!!!

[Sapientiam]

Love can be complex. So are human beings. They can be beautiful; they can be inconceivable. They can be so untrustworthy that the meaning behind the words "I love you" can be lost immediately... But, as bad as we can betray, I believe we need that chance to find love. That leap, not knowing if it will end in heartbreak or eternal happiness is quite difficult. Though, why not? Life can be very mysterious and cruel, and you have painted that picture perfectly... Well done!

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much dear...
Yea you are right...........
absolutely correct......
Well, love is love...
sometimes true is hidden.. but great to find out...