Few steps back...

Few steps back...

A Chapter by Anindita Janhabee

I wish I'd take
A few steps back
Back to the place where
I was happy being unhappy
Still I don't know
Why I write this
When I do know
Life's just unfair to me
In all possible ways
It gives me pleasure
For one night
Yet provides six long nights
With pain and tears
Do I really deserve
The unfairness
Only because I keep patience
And trust all those
Who enter into my life
I managed to move on
Very hardly, with half heart broken
Now can't just bear
The same once again
Why did you break
My lonely heart,
When it was already sobbing...
Didn't you even realize
What I'd be feeling
It has been only 3 days
Of our relationship
Which u started and ended
Like it was limited, very short
Yet all the happiness I got
I won't forget ever...
Whatever it may be for you
I loved you with all my heart
And I know that for sure.....


© 2016 Anindita Janhabee


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I can't comment anything on this...
This is absolutely painful...
when someone break you heart....
Sometime for peoples, it is a game & they make fun out of this...
But they'll never understood how much pain this gives to the person whose heart is broken...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

7 Years Ago

yes... vry true..
and I really hate those people... I will definitely forgive those people bu.. read more
sometimes, the friendships esp. the meager relationships ain't stand for long.. never been that long lasting, may be, 'cause.. the life decides something better for all of us, perhaps, we oft. find worst-ness in that. afterall, it's not our fault, there's never fault in anything, it's human nature, & it's all the.. state of mind what we're incessantly & so reluctantly passin' through so sometimes, i ev'n happen to know, things really need to change, but we don't know, how they change.. and in what way -- whether good or bad, it's all up-to... how we treat those friendships or relationships or bear oneself with someone who bear (s) us at all... in time. kinda very realistic and non-fiction type write you have written this time. & i oft. enjoy and always admire reading such non-fiction stuffs. there's so much reality and depth of REAL heart hidden behind those stuffs which further display the virtue of this world, & hustle people to the right edge of their life. excellent work here. nice imagery, as always!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

U r right Adam.. and thanks a lot for the review ..
Adam Adams

8 Years Ago

anytime, sweetheart.
Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

thank u so much!!! u just rock !!
Nice poem but its really sad that you've lost your heart to someone.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

...thanks... but can't help really.....
Writer at last! Sky ~

8 Years Ago

welcome.....

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Anindita Janhabee
Anindita Janhabee

Jeypore, Odisha, India



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