Unreached destination...

Unreached destination...

A Chapter by Anindita Janhabee
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In that windy evening 
Down the path of dewy grass 
You walked along with me. 
My hand in yours, yours in mine 
Walking together to nowhere 
When your curious eyes stared me 
And my unanswerable lips 
Bent down, counting the footsteps 
A drop of tear fell from my eye 
Forming a transparent droplet
Right on the grass 
As you stopped there and told 
"I have waited enough to listen you" 
And I replied 
"These are the last steps we're taking together..."
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© 2016 Anindita Janhabee


Author's Note

Anindita Janhabee
something left unsaid...

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WoW!!!
so fluid and sad........beautiful!!!
great job!!!
i loved it!!!!
:)
p.s. kindly read it once, a few mistakes are there........you will easily spot them.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the review and also for spotting the errors.. I am grateful for that!!!
That ending is so sad... It is a sorrowful thing to know that the times spent with the one you love will all wither like decaying leaves, never to be seen. Yet, there is a sense of beauty in the memories that were held, which makes the life lived so bittersweet. This is wonderful!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

Yes, absolutely. Memories are forever. Actually, I started writing this poem, suddenly I got away fr.. read more

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Anindita Janhabee
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