Miracle in you...

For my best friend 'miraculous'...

I was lost in dark

It was you who created a spark.

I was lying down pretending to stop

It was you who lifted me up.

I thought there was no one to cope

It was you who gifted me hope.

I was running behind something unknown

It was you who acted as a capstone.

I was living in my past being sad

It was you who showed me the future I had.

I was unable to judge what was worthwhile

It was you who brought me a smile.

I was busy watching my deep scar

It was you who viewed me the brightest star.

I believed some miracle did exist

It was you who couldn’t even resist.

I named you ‘Miraculous’, hoping you’d live up to your name

And you smiled and hoped the same.

I still pray god to grant you success

So you’d be the one to make high progress...

Thank you Miraculous!!!

Author's Note

This is for my best friend Miraculous, for all that he had done for me... I owe a lot to him and hope he keeps this piece as a sweet memory forever...
May all of you get a best friend like Miraculous...

Reviews

[Ashish]

"Miraculous" nice nick name.
A very good tribute , and the best part is "I was busy watching my deep scar
It was you who viewed me the brightest star."

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you once again....
Sabu Kichi aji hi review Kariba Na kan......!

[Ashish]

Haha, well you can't say, when to review...

[Anindita Janhabee]

han... thik katha...

[Sikandar Khan]

EveryPerson Get A Special Person In His Life Who Makes Him Realize his existence and abilities..........

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing..... i am really glad...

[Sikandar Khan]

Wellcome....

[Papaya]

That's a sweet poem for your friend. :)
Very lucky to have one who enhances your life so richly.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you Ana...
yes..I'm lucky for my friend...

[Shabeeh Haider]

Great to have such a friend in ones life who is responsible for lifting you up and helping you create miracles.
A beautiful poem in rhymes. A fine tribute to your friend.

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks a lot... sir...
It's really encouraging and my friend's really enchanting....

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

That's beautiful and miraculous like the title says....we all need such friends in life.

[Anindita Janhabee]

oh... thanks a lot.. very true..
thanks for the review so soon...

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

lol still I need to read many I know. Welcome :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

no problem, u can take your own time friend....

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!!
sweet honest dedication to a miracle of a friend...........
well rhymed!!!
i liked it!!!
:)

[Anindita Janhabee]

thank you for your time reading....

[Pushkar Prabhat]

my pleasure......!!! :) :)

[Sapientiam]

I'm glad that you have found someone worthy of being miraculous. Friendship is such a beautiful, complex concept that can push people down or lift them up. In this case, it seems that you were able to rise to peace with the love of your friend. That is truly special... Great job! I love this book of poems!

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much dear. Your reviews are great supports to me, thanks a lot for the time reading... Very soon I will be posting other chapters or poems of this book. I have completed writing 15 poems in a month and half. It was exciting. Now just left to post, then I will be expecting good and honest reviews... Thanks again for the valuable time.... lol..

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A telling and simple piece that shows the apperception of another, which is rare indeed in on of itself, well done, good read.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot for visiting and even more thanks for the sweet review... I am glad...

[Nwang]

This piece is unique.You have written a good verse here. Nice ode to dedicate to your faithful friend, and I like the feel of the poem. Its happy and your words are like a big 'Thank You' .
Hope your friend liked it.I liked it a lot.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Yep, he liked this because I am the first to write a poem for him. I am glad you read it so soon and wrote a sweet review...

[Nwang]

you are most welcome ;)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Whenever u get time, read my story secret tulips, I wrote that story as my friend taught me how to write stories... I learnt a lot from him and so I respect him a lot...my best friend...he is a very good story writer...