I need someone...

I need someone to care for me,

Erasing all my sadness

My inner beauty who can see.

I need someone to make me smile,

Wiping all my tears

Who’d remove everything fragile.

I need someone to be my support,

Carrying me along

Who’d not lie a single sort.

I need someone to hold me tight,

Being out of fear

Who’d make everything alright.

I need someone to sing me a beautiful song,

Sprouting plant of happiness

Who’d never let me go wrong.

I want someone to make my wishes come true,

Blushing on my name

Who’d fight to rescue.

I want someone to be with me forever,

Hoping for the best

Who’d intend to endeavor…

Author's Note

When one feels extremely lonely....
The picture doesn't match the verse though...

Reviews

[Johnny Dep]

I feel the same, Anindita you got good words to move on..

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks again dear... yes this is what I thought before I met my soulmate...

[Johnny Dep]

You are welcome.

[Tony Jordan]

Your Authors Note struck me - 'the picture does not match the verse' - well it's a human reaction to the camera to smile so forgive yourself. The sadness is writ large in your eyes though.

To the poem:
I think this might be better -
My inner beauty who can see.
like this:
Whom my inner beauty can see.

Ending on the word endeavour is unique in that it is vague here because the word is usually qualified by the goal - i.e. endeavour to win, endeavour to succeed, endeavour to X.
It's not that it doesn't work, it just, well...it's vague.

Overall the poem is so full of yearning that it's a wish from the heart to the Universe which I think is so sincere, so filled with longing, that it cannot but be heard and delivered upon. I too made such a wish - but I would say, "Be careful what you wish for..."

One of the most heartfelt poems I have read on W.C. Anindita. Bravo!
:)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so very much dear... m glad to see your wonderful words all the time... highly appreciated .....
stay blessed...

[Tony Jordan]

Welcome my friend.
:)

[Sikandar Khan]

EveryOne Wish For The SomeOne Who Can Love him/her in Any Wayy With True Hearty Good Poem
You Are Explaining Your Dreams In This Poem..............

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much...
Yep nice choice of poem....
Haha... this pic is kind of crazy one....
Glad for your words...

[Sikandar Khan]

Welcome ..........

[Sikandar Khan]

EveryOne Wish For The SomeOne Who Can Love him/her in Any Wayy With True Hearty Good Poem
You Are Explaining Your Dreams In This Poem..............

[tanmay7551]

True :) The picture doesn't match the verse.

In the life of everyone arrives that someone someday, but true sometimes we feel extremely lonely.

Well written and good choice of words.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank u for your review again... I'm glad for those...

[Ashish]

That is really cute...
I wish for that someone...
But sometime I think I am OK to be alone..at least I will not cheat myself, I can't lie to myself, I will be loyal to myself..

Yet again fantastic poem :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Loneliness is better.... but sometimes we need that someone......... sometimes..... some company........
Thank you for your time...

[Ashish]

Hmm.. Sometime...
somewhere...
somehow ....
someone...

[Unknown Poet]

Very beautiful ..
I would tell it has come from your heart.... deffentely that perfect person come to U one day.. cute picture of your s ... Thank you for sharing Anindita ....

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank u once again for ur kind review....

[Unknown Poet]

Hehe once again misspelled ..!!
Im sorry again its an new smartphone.. so ..

[Unknown Poet]

My pleasure

[Gee]

We all need that special someone, luckily I found mine 25years ago. With the added photo, which is lovely, it reads like an up market, looking for love ad. Saying that, a very well written one

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot for your time...
Am happy for you, hope you are enjoying every bit since 25 yrs...... Thnk u😃

[Gee]

My pleasure. 25 years has gone in the blink of an eye, 16 of them with a beautiful daughter. I love my wife more with each passing year.

[Anindita Janhabee]

This is so cute and nice of you and your sweet family.......
May you all stay blessed like this always.........😃

[Gee]

Thank you, and may the frogs stop calling and your Prince arrive sooner rather than later. Take care

[Anindita Janhabee]

😊😊😊
You're welcome and also thanks.....

[Sudeep Mishra]

This is what I am talking about. Your each words has gallons of hope inside, emitting positivity. I can see a latent poet unravelling her's true identity. Keep going.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much for your review!!!

[horizon]

Beautiful...but only one who can make you feel better and happy is you yourself firdt

[Anindita Janhabee]

So true... thank you for the lovely review....