It's unfair...

A sad story within a poem...

I was happy in my way

It was you who interrupted

Still I hated you

Till when it got unexpected...

      I never looked at you

      It was you who stared

      Whatever you did

      I never cared...

You let me know

The care you had for me

And I could not deny

Cause I too was able to see…

      I began to search

      The hidden miracle in you

      You showed up in happiness

      I thought it was true…

I asked you for friendship

You gifted me with great pleasure

I lived in it cheerfully

As every time you did assure…

      Each day we lived to the fullest

      With unexplained blushes and smiles

      Each night we hoped the best

      With innumerable messages till miles…

Then you told over the phone

That it was something called love

It felt me like a dream

Like god had sent an angel from above…

      You promised me

      To fulfill each wish of mine

      You were the first to say this

      And in me you began to shine…

You let me know about your past

And I heard being strong

For a moment I thought

All my thoughts were wrong…

      You proved that she was the only one

      Whom your heart you would lend

      Still I kept patience

      Because then I was only your friend…

The fine line which we had crossed

Could then never bring us back

I kept shedding tears

Asking myself what did I lack…

      I did not want you

      To become my past

      Cause once you assured me

      That it would ever last…

I accepted your past

As well as you

Still I was waiting for you to say

That it was not at all true…

      Time passed by

      And it seems everything was gone

      Only your writings did remain

      For making me hurt and torn…

If it is told ‘trust in god’

Who even broke the best pair

Then god must realize

It was really unfair…

 

 

Author's Note

Something that really hurts... saying, its really unfair...
hope you like the story within the poem...
I am in wait for your honest reviews...

Reviews

[Shiny]

I loved this poem. Nicely written. Thanks for sharing.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Love is defined so intensely....
Your writing seems all honestly captured with deep thoughts and emotions...
Was a great read!!

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much for your time....

[Tazeen Ahmed]

You're welcome!!

[Unknown Poet]

Its really unfain ,,,actually for men too for neglecting an true angel like you...
Heart touching work...

[Anindita Janhabee]

Haha... thanks for your warm read and beautiful review....

[Unknown Poet]

You are most welcome :)

[D Connolly]

Oh Ani, it's so sad! I'm remembering falling in love for the first time and then having my heart broken because the boy I loved wanted another girl. It does feel unfair, but I assure you, YOU ARE AN ANGEL and will find the perfect man one day. All this unfairness is going to allow you to walk through open doors later. Much love, Dani XOXO

[Anindita Janhabee]

Oh ma'am... thank I so much for ur wonderful time nd kind words.......

[Jibey]

It is hard when a guy plays on a girl's heart for willfully... Of course, we can be attracted to others even though we are already in a relationship but it is unfair to make out that more is possible...
The poem is well crafted and brings out the pai of being given unrealistic hopes...

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you dear writer for your time reading this piece... yes, your words are true...

[Ashish]

My goodness...
One of my best ever read poetry...
You are fantastic...
Touched my heart...
Stay blessed :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so very much for the warm read...
I'm glad you liked it...
and I hope you'll like my other pieces too...
thank you..

[Sukeerti]

Every phase of life teaches us a lesson ! We should have the strength to accept the reality. Good one.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Yes... thank you for the visit...

[horizon]

Someone should not shed tears because any one left them...we love from a true heart and feelings so pure and untouched why would we cry...instead let them cry for not realising the truth of love...one must be proud that we are still smiling...ok girl..but nice poetry...letting heart out...good way...

[Anindita Janhabee]

Yep... true words...
thank you for the review and kind words dear ....

[horizon]

You should get going...and my mail is not working hs...I read everything but can't reply yarrrr

[Anindita Janhabee]

That's alright yaar...

[Amit Dhiman]

Nice piece of work.. Really...

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot for your visit...

[Amay Saxena]

The poem conveys the story in the nicest way!

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks for the visit...