Sleepless nights

Out of sleep...

I remember the day

It was raining heavily

And you were all set

To leave the town…

I remember the hour

It was like thorns piercing

At the centre of my heart

As you walked away…

I remember the minute

I felt like I was falling

Into uncountable pieces

For you didn’t even think of me…

I remember the second

When tears shed

From my dark brown eyes

Because you left me alone…

I remember each moment

That passed as I missed you

From the core of my heart

Cause my soul belonged to you…

I remember each night

I kept thinking of you

Being sleepless

And still loving you…

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Something penned down unknowingly...
please rate or review....

Reviews

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I feel the emotions have been expressed extremely well with a rhythmic flow that really creates a picture in front of the readers. Nice work my friend :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks once again ... : )

[Deep]

you started the poem beautifully and ended it at a place where reader can pause for a moment to think that one moment occurred to them.
Worth reading it.
Beautiful write!!

[Anindita Janhabee]

thank you so much!!!
i am glad u liked it... :)

[Shabeeh Haider]

A very sad and heartfelt write. It is lovely how you have recalled the hours, the minutes and the seconds as you remembered someone who has left you.
Your closing lines sum up this poem beautifully.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you for enjoying.. I would like to request you to read my next poems, recent ones... I will be glad for your honest reviews...

[Shabeeh Haider]

I will read them soon

[Anindita Janhabee]

thank you...

[Anindita Janhabee]

Sir, i have added the new story, please read and give a constructive review with criticisms at their best... I will be waiting... take your time reading...

[Shabeeh Haider]

I will read it soon

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks... : )

[zunie frost]

wow you describe the sleepless night in a very different way !!
so creative and full of deep emotions
great work

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks my dear friend for your sweet words...

[Coyote Poetry]

Memories and people missed. Tattoos upon a heart and the mind.
"I remember each night
I kept thinking of you
Being sleepless
And still loving you…"
Kind and gentle words told a story in the amazing poetry. Thank you.
Coyote

[Anindita Janhabee]

thank u once again sir... I appreciate your words..

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.