Sleepless nights

Out of sleep...

I remember the day

It was raining heavily

And you were all set

To leave the town…

I remember the hour

It was like thorns piercing

At the centre of my heart

As you walked away…

I remember the minute

I felt like I was falling

Into uncountable pieces

For you didn’t even think of me…

I remember the second

When tears shed

From my dark brown eyes

Because you left me alone…

I remember each moment

That passed as I missed you

From the core of my heart

Cause my soul belonged to you…

I remember each night

I kept thinking of you

Being sleepless

And still loving you…

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Something penned down unknowingly...
please rate or review....

Reviews

[costa siwale]

it is a beautifully sad story. well written

[Anindita Janhabee]

thank you for stopping by...

[costa siwale]

pleasure was all mine

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Beautiful in a way but very heartbreaking and sad write.
I enjoyed reading this quite allot though.
This was full of emotion, and meaning.
Heartbreak is hard and in this poem you explain just how hard it really is.
Very well written.

[Anindita Janhabee]

thank you cimmy for ur time reading...

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your welcome :)

[Carly]

This grabbed my attention and held on. I can almost feel your heartbreaking. And it reminded me of one of my own experiences. Thanks for sharing! :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks Carly for the warm review...
sorry for your situation, though..
But I am glad you gathered patience and strength to read this which is so much relatable to u...

[Sophia V]

I love this poem! It really spoke to me on an extreme emotional level. It put me in a different place/situation for a moment as I felt all the feels you implied. Amazing!!

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks for the intense read....
thank k you!!!

[Adam Adams]

"sleepless nights" is quite a captivating title. and the choice of your ideological words have treasured the worth of whole written poetry so well. i very well know, it's very piercing when heart aches, & mind seems to be so disturbed over night... & for what? -- nothing! -- just in a hope that someday time will revert back to old trespass gone arena of life, & we'll then able to change what's never distorted, perhaps.. funny it is, nothing comes back to us but what strikes hard back to life is... misery -- the misery of "sleepless nights". excellent work, doll.

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks a lot dear.... for your valuable time reading.... yes, you're right...that's for nothing... doesn't it match your poem ?
yep!! it does... and like, nothing returns back, someday , waiting for that miracle to occur!!! ; ) lol !!! thank u : )

[Karmee]

aww this is sad, but toward the end, i felt sadder.
it goes to show that love still exist. awesome write

[Anindita Janhabee]

Yep, but when there is pain, there is poetry.... so can't help too...
thanks for reading....

[Karmee]

no problem

[Lord of mad men]

Wow powerful. I love how you say so much with so few words. It just speak so loudly keep on writing. I could never bare such pain like that with out many sleepless nights too so you are a very strong person.

[Anindita Janhabee]

thank you...
life is as such, have to accept all those it gives....
Thanks for your time reading...

[Silmara McGarry]

Beautifully sad and truly heart felted. I was there with you.

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks for the warm support dear!!!

[Lorry]

Sad, poignant and heartfelt words, that repeat in the mind, over and over, as you replay the awfulness of being left, over and over in your mind. Probably the worst fate of all is all those unanswered questions.

[Anindita Janhabee]

yes, very true...
thanks for the honest words...

[Miss Sharon]

Very beautifully written! I like the repetition of the "I remember" phrase which tied it all together so well. Bravo my friend. ~Sharon

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks ma'am for your time reading my little work...

[Miss Sharon]

Always welcome sweetie! ~SP