Sleepless nights

Out of sleep...

I remember the day

It was raining heavily

And you were all set

To leave the town…

I remember the hour

It was like thorns piercing

At the centre of my heart

As you walked away…

I remember the minute

I felt like I was falling

Into uncountable pieces

For you didn’t even think of me…

I remember the second

When tears shed

From my dark brown eyes

Because you left me alone…

I remember each moment

That passed as I missed you

From the core of my heart

Cause my soul belonged to you…

I remember each night

I kept thinking of you

Being sleepless

And still loving you…

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Something penned down unknowingly...
please rate or review....

Reviews

[Johnny Dep]

Simple way it's missing you, like missing someone.
Showed up very well.

[Sikandar Khan]

Nicee Poem Of Missing Your LOves Ones And Express The Feeelings OfWhen SomeOne Most Close To Your Heart Leaves

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank u for understanding the feelings put here...
I appreciate your words....

[Sikandar Khan]

Wellcome............its easy to understand because i also know the value of true love

[Anindita Janhabee]

that's so kind of u...

[Sikandar Khan]

yeah......................

[D Connolly]

This makes me think back on my life and all the times I've left a place for one reason or another. I was so sad to leave those people and those places. I spent many nights crying myself into sleep missing them.

[Anindita Janhabee]

I'm glad my reader could relate this and sorry army the same time... Thanks for your time...

[D Connolly]

Oh, that's just life. Being in a military family we were always leaving some place, going to another :)

[Nessly]

Your use of imagery here is absolutely beautiful. The way you use time throughout this piece adds to the deep sorrow it expresses. Thorns in one's heart never sounds appealing. Great write.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot for your time reading my work and reviewing with your kind words.... I'm glad.... 😃

[tanmay7551]

Very good choice of words and flowing out of a soul hurty by seperation and love that never dies.

Keep it up!

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you for your time reading and reviewing....

[Swati Nayak]

beautiful poem dear
love the way you showed the pangs of separation,the pain in the heart of a lover whose love has been lost...

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you for the visit...

[Ashish]

Miss talented ... If u unknowingly write so heart touching poems ..then!!! I was thinking what it would be..when you write knowingly..

BTW again.. So it's magical.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot for your time reading and reviewing...
greatly appreciated...

[Jerryyoung1z]

You used time quite nicely here: day, hour, minute e.t.c Something that covers us all...
Once the heart chooses, it's hard to let go, no matter the hurt and pain that follows.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Yes you are right Jerry...
Thanks for your words...

[Lord Sarthak]

nice i could relate this with myself

[Anindita Janhabee]

thank you Sarthak...

[Manel]

i loved it
it is a lovely way to express your feeling and the situation as well
good job honey

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks for your time reading my little work...

[Manel]

you are welcome keep up with the good work