REFLECTION

REFLECTION

A Poem by Anindita Janhabee
"

LetLet your reflection reflect your best image...

"

 

I am a simple piece

 

As I exist along with you

Money doesn't matter to me

 

Rumors I do never leave

Extra-ordinary may be you but not me

Flirting isn't my nature, honestly

Light is the one I'm dependent upon

Enthusiasm- I display but not much

Caring is not my personality though

Truth is the only simplicity I show

I look like you but I'm totally pure

Only reality I love not perfection

Never mind me because I'm your reflection...

 

 

© 2016 Anindita Janhabee


Author's Note

Anindita Janhabee
This is my first acrostic poem....
enjoy and review...

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The rhymes, the feelings are all fantastic. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful piece of art. Delighted with the read :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

thank you... it was my first acrostic so I was really confused how good it would be...
Writer at last! Sky ~

8 Years Ago

Most welcome :)
A beautiful acrostic poem. It is not easy to write because of strict rules. The feelings expressed are just what someone would love to hear.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

thank you sir, i am glad that you did understand the hard work...
Great piece! I love it! Keep writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

thank you for stopping by and giving a little of your precious time to my poem...
Well done Anindita... This is truly beautiful to read.
Ending seems perfect to me and leaves a good impression on the reader.
I liked how you maintained the flow.
The subject of the poem is very deep.
--Only reality I love not perfection
Never mind me because I'm your reflection...
These lines sent chills down my spine....Once again...what an end to such a beautiful poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

thank you so much dear friend....
u r the second to review nd I m glad...
I enjoyed the poem. I liked the set-up and the thoughts.
"I look like you but I'm totally pure
Only reality I love not perfection
Never mind me because I'm your reflection..."
No perfection in real life. Just good places that become sweeter with time. We need reflection to keep our sanity. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 8 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

thank you so much for the quick and first review...
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

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Anindita Janhabee
Anindita Janhabee

Jeypore, Odisha, India



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