Relations may change,
Still I hope for the best
Just for you...
Those lines really shows the character of the person. Love is not all about sharing or seeking but in reality its all about "Giving" and you're truly in love, if you always want your love to be happy. I really enjoy the deepness of our thoughts and the beautifully framed rhymes. Keep writing :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
thanks a lot... coz ur words mean a lot...
by the way I m in grade 10, last yr of schooling, .. read morethanks a lot... coz ur words mean a lot...
by the way I m in grade 10, last yr of schooling, wrote for a best friend...
It is a beautiful love poem enhancing the fact that when one is in love the persons actions are for the other person. " Just for you"
There is hope at the end : "I still wait with patience"
but at the end " I still hope for the best, Just for you"
Very sweetly penned
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
thank you so much for reading my little piece, I am glad...
Well done Anindita, this poem was superb and in many ways full of hope.
I liked the way you maintained the flow of the poem,
Beautiful ending
Relations may change,
Still I hope for the best
Just for you
Here the last line is superb, very much liked the way you ended the poem with your utter most desire, to tell the lover that this all is just for you, whoever i am , i am just for you...
Keep it up.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
thank you for the beautiful review friend...
i wish the one could read this for whom this is .. read morethank you for the beautiful review friend...
i wish the one could read this for whom this is written...
It is in its original form, without being edited.
i want to shout and say my friend - whoever i'm today, its just for you!!
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