I'll wait for you...

whatever may be the reason, I'll wait for you...

Time may pass by,

Making me lonely and cry…

Changing world’s every relationship,

May it be short or deep…

Every moment you’ll be in my heart,

That may be the end or a start…

Distance may make us apart through miles,

But I won’t forget you were the reason of my smiles…

Our thoughts may change and differ,

Also may get down to cheaper…

Destinations " of course, vary;

You may leave me behind, your friendship - I’ll carry…

Your patience for me may not exist for long,

Still I request you not to go wrong…

The world may appear against me,

But I’ll always be besides you, whatever the reason may be…

You may forget me, but I’ll never forget you,

You’ll be the only one I’ll look forward to…

For me you are an unforgettable memory, its true;

Whatever may come along the way, I’ll wait for you…

Author's Note

Written for someone special...well, I don't know the person... may be I should save it for future.... hahahaha : )

Reviews

[Shabeeh Haider]

A promise to love forever....to wait forever. Very nicely written

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks for enjoying... yep u r right...
I am glad u liked it..

[Arman]

fantastic writing, i really liked it.
overall nice flowing or sensual sentences.
You’ll be the only one I’ll look forward to…
For me you are an unforgettable memory, its true;
thanks for it sharing.

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks so much friend... glad that u liked it, thanks for ur time reading...

[Arman]

your welcome!

[Randhir kaur]

O a fantastic write...the anguish is very strong.. keep up..
I too have written a poem something like such,the same title...but different with a different feeling...

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks for enjoying dear...

[Happy hours]

The journey and struggle of waiting for someone.
very well penned. :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks for the review...

[Terry O'Leary]

Insightful!
Sometimes, after much effort, a relationship may nevertheless dissolve... but the feelings and memories will persist until death...
Good poem!!!
Terry

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks for the review, glad to see it after a long time...

[Khalil Jibran]

such a great poem.... love those kind of sad poems..... you have great writing skills.... keep writing

[Anindita Janhabee]

thank you...
by the way, i have recently read a poem, song of the rain by Kahlil Gibran...read morethank you...
by the way, i have recently read a poem, song of the rain by Kahlil Gibran...
thanks for enjoying..

[Inject Positivity]

This is full of promises and the most important part of it is the way you have presented an emotional concept here... Distance can make a heart cry but it cannot destroy the feelings of a heart... This is innocent in it's nature and I really loved the simplicity of it...

It has a nice flow and structure and something very classy, the reader can feel the emotion of the poet....

Regards
Dhiman

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot for your review... I thank you for enjoying the deep feelings and reviewing too...
read moreThanks a lot for your review... I thank you for enjoying the deep feelings and reviewing too...
well, it is just for my best friend, who is right here, in this community but doesn't know about this poem. as we are separated, my friend doesn't login very often. I wish this poem to be read by my friend.. anyway, plz try checking my other recent poems, if any error then be free to mention... thanks...

[Usman Muhammad]

Very impressive writing. One can say after reading this that this writing was all about true love, which is very difficult to find these days. Your thoughts were perfectly adjusting with words, and flow of the poem was beautiful.Credit goes to you that you have summed up the whole life of a true and passionate lover. One more thing which i liked was your writing never contradicted reality, which is a good thing. Because as long as you write according to reality people will find it easy to grasp the theme of your writing. Keep writing and stay blessed.
Regards
Usman

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot... I am grateful to see your review...
'true love' - I don't even have experienced it, may have, but i did not knew about it. This was the experience I had with a close friend of mine for whom I wrote this poem, without checking or editing once. Still, i don't know about my feelings for my friend... We are quite young -15 and 16, still, we share a unique bond, which we both are aware of..
anyway, thanks for the sweet review dear...

[Usman Muhammad]

Then i got this right......I mean TRUE LOVE, just kidding. Keep writing.

[Anindita Janhabee]

YEP! YEP! YEP!

[Ghost]

Very beautiful.The illustration of emotions was just amazing.

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks for reviewing and reading too...

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Beautiful.......
honest and heartfelt......
very well written....
i really liked it!!!
:)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks for stopping here to read this poem, I appreciate it...
Thanks for the review...

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome........!!! :) :)