I AM GONNA MISS YOU

I AM GONNA MISS YOU

A Poem by Anindita Janhabee
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For my best friend who is about to be apart from me...

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For my Best Friend,
Without whom I am incomplete,
For whom I always smile;
The one who will remain in my heart forever,
Who has got a special place in my heart, 
More than a friend,
Cared like the closest,
Obeyed me like the sweetest,
And waited for me like the most patient...
Although few things are left unsaid,
I trust the friend even more than myself.
Our friendship is something unique...
We fight against each other,
Care for each other,
And become crazy together.
I feel like we met yesterday,
And I also remember each funny moment that I have spent with you.
You were the first person who asked me about the wishes of my life,
And valued those so much even when,
Those wishes were crazy!!
And finally, you are about to go,,,
Far away from me...
I am scared of the distance,
Which will make us apart,
And the Time,
Which may change our relationship...
I pray god to bless our friendship,,
So that;
It will last forever...
And as you are to leave me alone,
I AM GONNA MISS YOU.............

© 2016 Anindita Janhabee


Author's Note

Anindita Janhabee
This poem is all about the unique friendship of me and my best friend... Unfortunately, my friend is going to be apart, leaving me all alone... I am really very upset for that. This is for the first time I have written about 'missing someone'. I hope god will make us meet again in future...
Waiting for your reviews... Enjoy reading....

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Heart felt.
Thank you for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very emotional heart felt poem, I feel so much emotions in this piece.
Some of this was happy some not so happy.
Seems like the bond between you and your best friend is very strong, you guys seem to have quite the connection.
I am sorry that why are going away for awhile but I'm sure you guys will keep in contact while your best friend is gone.

You first wrote a poem about your dad and now one about your best friend.
You write about the people that mean allot to you, I hope you show them these poems they are very sweet, you seem like a very caring person.
Wonderful Write keep on writing :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the sweet words again..
Yes, sometimes I do write to take out the pain or love in m.. read more
cimmy wuv xxxooo

8 Years Ago

That is all true :)
You are more then welcome :)
Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

I'm glad for your feedback...: )
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I can relate to the feeling all too well.. Anyway with a few tears, and old memories...Mine died unexpectedly, in a really odd condition considering his age...

but enough of my babbling :)

a heartfelt piece, well penned. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

ohh dear... I understand your words... but we hv to be strong.... unexpectedly...
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8 Years Ago

Yes... Unexpectedly. One day we wrote songs had fun, the next morning he's in the hospital...
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hi
ok i like it and and everything but to me this seemed to me to have a darker side to it,
or maybe that was just me

but i still like it

Posted 8 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

well, sometimes life turns dark and this is what exactly shows that... thanks for the review...
I enjoyed this very much...sometimes it seems a destined journey..apart..to find what we're searching for...other times... swiftly and seemingly unfairly...it just goes away... leaving only the good memories left behind.. All we can hope is that somewhere...someone is also thinking of us---in the exact same way--- even for only a few brief moments in time..
heck yeah...nice one! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

thank u so much for the sweet review dear...
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Damn, Anindita why you have to make me cry. By far, the most emotion filled writing I read to date on this cafe. Love every word and the feeling of abandonment. Remember my piece you read called moving on, well it was I had recently made. All my first writings in this cafe were about her and our break in friendship. Even though it is in a different context, I totally feel what you wrote in this poem. The loneliness, the longing and asking God to somehow or someway met up again. I think this is a master piece and thank you so much for not keeping it inside and blessing us with this beautiful work. Much blessings. N.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much N for such a kind review and wonderful support... We are quite in same situation, .. read more
I really liked this..!
Keep it up....
There will be some moment we all really didn't want ever to happen..
But we do confront such terrible circumstances of separation from a very special person .. Very true feelings penned here...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

glad for your time and visit.. thanks..
Unknown Poet

8 Years Ago

Most welcome ...
Its worth reading this Anindita *Smiles*
This poem is quite touching...Beautiful!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

thanks for feeling the touch dear...
It brought tears to my eyes....I am in this situation now ....I am leaving my school and my best friend shruti...I found its every line meaningful and true....I am feeling that anxiety that with whom i will share all my feelings i feel like without my bestie i would die...How will i keep all my feelings within myself....keep it up and thanks for sharing...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

YEAH, SAME HERE, FRIEND IS ABOUT TO LEAVE ME ALL ALONE AND THAT'S THE GREAT SADNESS I HAVE NOW...read more
An excellent description of the anxiety felt of 'losing' a friend... very well done!
Terry

Posted 8 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reading and reviewing...

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