DAD - THE GREAT...

My love for DAD...

 'DAD' made me happy in his presence,

Made me sad in his absence,

A person who's the first favorite of mine,

And will always be loved from the core of my heart...

'DAD' sometimes made me laugh, 

At his funny jokes,

And sometimes made me cry, 

For his angry scolding...

'DAD' is a priceless yet precious gift,

Who supports me when my heart needs a lift,

Cares so much with sentiments,

And never lets me get down...

'DAD' without whom I can't even imagine myself,

To stay alive, I badly desire him,

He is someone,

Without whom I am none...

LOVE YOU DAD...

Author's Note

Its the love and respect that I have for my Dad..
Enjoy reading, suggestions are most welcome...
Waiting for your reviews!!!

Reviews

[tanmay7551]

Very beautiful and your Dad will be proud. Say my hello to him and appreciate your expression of words.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Of course I will... Thanks a lot for the warm visit...

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

So beautiful, and right around fathers day you wrote this. I hope you showed your dad this beautiful poem.
I enjoyed reading this its very sweet and full of love and emotion.
Very well written and well done, I can feel the love in this poem :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

thank you dear.... yeah you are right...
I showed it to him on Father's day...
And he enjoys this every time he reads...
I love him too much!!!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awww what a wonderful thing to do, would have made his day.
I can see you love him very much, I'm sure he loves you just as much.
Your welcome :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

yeah.... thanks to u...my dear ..

[D]

A beautiful tribute. He's gotta be something. :)

You never mentioned you're so beautiful ;)

Well penned.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much friend for your lovely review... and also for the time reading... And I am a bit young in this picture, recent one still lies in chapter "I need someone..." By the way, all is created by God. Real beauty lies in heart and in my case, it lies in writing.... thank you!!!

[D]

I know. but still... :) My pleasure

[Anindita Janhabee]

So sweet... by the way how did you know that you're a yr older than me???

[D]

your Bio states you're fifteen. I'm sixteen. :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

oh ... so you read it... by the way good to know that you're sixteen and write so creatively.... I'd like to know more about you.... : )

[D]

Ask away dear :)
in a message or public. :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Very nice poem. The place of Dad is the most important one in everyone's life....

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks for your review Skyfall...

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Most Welcome Ani :)

[Akshita]

Beautiful poem! Makes me love my dad even more. : )

[Anindita Janhabee]

Well, it was written for exactly that purpose... happy u caught that... : )

[Shabeeh Haider]

A father and daughter have a wonderful relationship. ( I have two lovely daughters).
Sometimes we exchange jokes as if we are friends and the same age. I do scold then at times though that makes me very sad and then I have to spend some time trying to make up for it.
Your dad is a handsome man and you are a sweet little girl.

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks a lot sir, I like it even more when someone appreciates my dad...
thanks a lot.. I hope you spend each sweet moment with your daughters to the fullest...

[Manisha]

its absolutely correct my dear
DADS ARE OUR HEROS....
sometimes he make us laugh and sometimes also we cry but still they are our heros and always be
KEEP IT UP.....

[barleygirl]

What an awesome tribute to your dad! I had a crummy dad (abusive) so I can't imagine feeling this way about him. If I could write a poem to say what I missed in a dad, this would be the gist of it. I like that you appreciate the fun parts & the tough parts equally. It's clear you honor his guidance, even tho it's not stated explicitly here. The photo is precious & you are adorable! (((HUGS)))

[Anindita Janhabee]

thank you very much for reading and reviewing...
Also i wanna say that - dad is always precious, no matter how abusive or crummy he is. There is something good and also bad in every thing, so keep on accepting the good things and ignoring the bad things... keep loving and respecting your dad...
And about 'adorable', i was given this name by my best friend for the 1st time, u r the 2nd so i'm very happy that it was not fake name given by my friend to come closer to me, i deserve it...
thanks a lot, i appreciate both you and your hugs!!!

[E G TEN]

Hello Anindita, this is such a lovely tribute to your Dad and all the Fathers
around the world. I lost my Dad in my very early years, so I love to read
Poems such as this. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece of poetry. And
tour Dad looks cool. Thanks EG.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Ohh!! thanks a lot...
You have become one of the favorite writers of mine as I go deep inside your poems and alternatively, get lost into those...
So its a pleasure to read your review... thank you!!!

[Inject Positivity]

Lost my father when i was 2 and a half years old so never experienced what is father's love....Your poem came out from an honest heart to which her father means everything... innocence and a touch of sweetness makes it more beautiful.... full ratings....

[Anindita Janhabee]

its really sad, but i hope you will get all the lost love and affection from your close ones...
read moreits really sad, but i hope you will get all the lost love and affection from your close ones...
its my request to god to provide immense happiness to all the children who did not get care and love from their parents.. i am happy that you could feel through my poem, thank you...