Deep thoughts of you

Deep thoughts of you

A Poem by Anindita Janhabee
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You and only you...

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In the darkness of my heart,
You appeared as a candle
Just like a star,
In the night sky...
On my face of gloom,
You appeared as a smile
Just like a sunset,
By the bluish river...
In my pages of diary,
You appeared as a poem
Just like the luckiest pen,
For a writer...
In my imaginative thoughts,
You appeared as feelings
Just like the sweet dreams,
Of a dreamer...
Through my lips,
You appeared as songs
Just like the notes,
Coming out of a piano...
In my every glimpse,
You appeared as love
Just like the seven colours,
Glowing in every rainbow...
In my life,
You appeared as sunrise
Just as happiness,
After sorrow...

© 2016 Anindita Janhabee


Author's Note

Anindita Janhabee
This is for the first time, a poem about a special and unique feeling which moved around in my heart. It disturbed me so much so I put it on the page of my diary...

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Jenny - this speaks in a voice of knowing your thoughts are focused on dreams desiring to come true; the images left this reader with imaginations of a great relationship waiting to happen. I truly loved it!


Posted 8 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

Oh!! its my good fortune that you loved this poem so much, thanks for reading....
Amazing use of description.
"In my every glimpse,
You appeared as love
Just like the seven colours,
Glowing in every rainbow...""
I liked the above lines. Perfect description for love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

Thanks for enjoying sir,,, I am happy that you liked it...
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

I did like it and you are welcome.
oh............ great feeling in your poem. like it

Posted 8 Years Ago


So honest and refreshing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

thanks for the review dear, and sorry for being late...
similies at their best! :D :D great work!! simple language! powerful emotions.. amazing :) literally id say a poetry tht i understood in recent times :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

thanks for your wonderful review my friend... Perhaps this was my first poem about 'love'...
U do have a wonderful talent !!!
#making me insane


Posted 8 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your sweet words, I am happy that someone liked my first try on a different type of poem... read more
A lovely write....You did an amazing job putting your thoughts in this poem....I loved the comparisons you made about your feelings with some beautiful elements.....Loved the simplicity you have maintained....Full ratings....

Posted 8 Years Ago


Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

thanks a lot mr.positive for keeping my words and reading my poem.... i m privileged by reading your.. read more

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Added on January 11, 2016
Last Updated on October 9, 2016
Tags: Heart, brightness, smile, feelings, imagination, dreams, songs, rainbow and love.

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Anindita Janhabee
Anindita Janhabee

Jeypore, Odisha, India



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