Deep thoughts of you

You and only you...

In the darkness of my heart,

You appeared as a candle

Just like a star,

In the night sky...

On my face of gloom,

You appeared as a smile

Just like a sunset,

By the bluish river...

In my pages of diary,

You appeared as a poem

Just like the luckiest pen,

For a writer...

In my imaginative thoughts,

You appeared as feelings

Just like the sweet dreams,

Of a dreamer...

Through my lips,

You appeared as songs

Just like the notes,

Coming out of a piano...

In my every glimpse,

You appeared as love

Just like the seven colours,

Glowing in every rainbow...

In my life,

You appeared as sunrise

Just as happiness,

After sorrow...

Author's Note

This is for the first time, a poem about a special and unique feeling which moved around in my heart. It disturbed me so much so I put it on the page of my diary...

Reviews

[Leif+Henry]

I like the colors, they are quite colorful
for colors

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you for the descent review... I appreciate a lot...

[tanmay7551]

A very lucky person whom this poetry addresses as an inspiration of life.

Good thoughts!

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you once again... your words mean a lot ...

[Lorry]

A beautiful rainbow of words, kaleidoscopic in colour and in sentiment. We all need a rainbow to appear after the storm, great work.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks for reading...

[Lord Sarthak]

I am speechless after reading this

[Anindita Janhabee]

I am glad...

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!!
beautiful.......i like the play with colours.........
a heartfelt dedication.......
images....metaphors........awesome.......
well grafted dear poet......
i loved it!!!
:)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you Pushkar for your valuable time reading my little work...
I am glad you are my friend...

[D]

Hehehehe...Disturbed you? It's only love :)

A beautiful feeling, that gives a lot of joy, strength, peace to the person. .a purpose, an intoxicating drink, and that perfect, most beautiful drunkenness :)

well penned. He's a lucky dude for sure :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

thank u for the sweet review...

[D]

always a pleasure reading you (:

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Wow! that's something really a true lover can scribble in loneliness for sure....
The flow, the rhymes, the feelings, the imagination everything seems awesome about this poem.

Great Work :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you!!! Nice profile pic Skyfall...

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Most welcome Miss :)

[Shabeeh Haider]

These are words of a heart that is in love. Wonderful use of nature and abstract things to describe the feelings that you are going through.

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks for the review sir...

[Unknown Poet]

I liked the metaphors you used here..
I enjoyed reading this... *Smiles*

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks for reading and reviewing dear...

[Unknown Poet]

Welcome :)

[Khalil Jibran]

awesome poem ..... you have perfectly put down your feelings in this poem..... loved it

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks for enjoying...