CHILDHOOD

The memorable days...

Loving each sense

Being liked by everyone

Every funny demand

Fulfilled by parents

Without any reason

Life without being tense

Singing and roaming all around

Being crazy for chocolates

All the time busy in playing

On the top of the world

When there was love and no hatred feeling

When there was peace and no burden

When there were smiles and no responsibilities

Gathering all the friends

Feeling with all their simple sorrows

Finding a pleasure in all their simple joys

Enjoying each day as the last day

Breathing each moment as the last moment

Remembering my child life...THE HAPPY DAYS...

Author's Note

Just a glimpse of my childhood. I would be grateful if my writing brings back your loving memories back to you........
''The only reason why we desire to go back to the past...''

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

childhood always brings memory's to everyone's life. and it's true, at that age, we're all naive, innocence, & freee to make mistakes but inadvertently. so i believe, it's fun... & also very much memorable. we sometimes feel shattered, & broken, & completely tormented deep inside esp. when we recall gone days & wish... if we were the "SAGE" again. quite impressive. very well written!

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank u once again...
very true....but time never comes back...only memories stay forever...

[Adam Adams]

that's good.. that's good...
a very good point u point out here 'bout gone time & stemming memories. it's true, time never comes neither has it ever reverted back so it's quite worth moving on, but in b/w that, memories... oft. or may be, sometimes disturb us all over the time just to remind how furiously the time's gone. nice work here.

[Anindita Janhabee]

thank you once again...

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An ode to the lost days of youth.....

This poem is lovely; a series of personal emotions that you have put down to reminisce about your carefree days of youth. It is somewhat surprising because you are still very young and in the prime of your youth. These beautiful memories you write about in this poem will continue into your future. All that is memory, is never lost.

A very nicely written piece. Full of serenity and joy for the days past.

[Anindita Janhabee]

thank you so much for your time reading...... : )
yes, memory stays forever, it never dies...

[Ananya]

Aam ke ped par
Tyre ka jhoola tha
Barish ka mousam tha
Kachnaar phoola tha

Hansi thi, khushi thi
Naav kaghaz ki tirti thi,
Patang ki dor thame
Tere peechhe mein phirti this

Tum gaye Na vo baarish kabhi loutee
Tum gaye vo patangon ki dor bhi tooti
Aaj bas aankh mein paani hai air yaadein hain
Awaaz ghum hai maghar kaanon mein Teri Baatien hain

[Anindita Janhabee]

Yaar, kya likha hain... Par jo bhi likha hain, sab sach hain... Maine bhi ye sab dekhi hain aur saayad unhi khusiyon ke pal ko aaj sabhi khoj rahe hain. But I am sure, kisiko ajj ye sab nahin milega...
thanks for the review Anu, vry gd write though... : )

[Shabeeh Haider]

No matter how old you become your childhood will always be the sweetest time .
Nicely written

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you for your time reading Sir...

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I commend you in remembering the good memories. It is so refreshing to see that not all childhoods are bad. Maybe this is the key for a happy adult life, to remember the good times as a kid and make new ones as a grown up. You did an awesome job as always and to be so young you have so much wisdom. Blessings. N.

[Anindita Janhabee]

thank u so much sir, I appreciate your review as usual... I m glad u do like my poems...

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Your welcome. Please keep writing more.

[Anindita Janhabee]

yep, I will try my best to keep up my hobby, my passion...
all that I need is your supports...

[Riti Rajput]

You made the memories of my childhood, clear in my eyes... I wish I could go back to the time...
Nice poem friend.. :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks for enjoying dear...

[Hearm Jan]

Except with the "Chocolates" you really did paint my memorable days of childhood.

You've done well in using only 'my' on this poem. --// you made the readers feel that they're the one who's talking instead of you. (I don't know if you realize it, or you know what you've done on this piece.)

And without the genre, warnings, this poem itself is meant for those readers; not just to relate but to reminds them with they're old times.

With the help of your profile picture, I read this with the beautiful voice of a female.

The atmosphere and the tune of the voice is soft.

I can feel the fresh air of the past with this poem, caressing my shoulder.

-Jan

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot for reading as well as enjoying...
I am in high school now, 10th and perhaps the last grade, in a good mood to collect and gather memories with friends, teachers and new achievements. This is just like that - my childhood memories... And of course I realized it now after reading your review that this does attract the attention of the reader, thanks for the beautiful review...
thanks a lot once again sir...

[Barbara Kasey Smith]

Speaks in a voice of memorable great loving days of happiness and joy; opened this reader's senses to feel, smell and relate.

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks for the enjoyment ma'am.. i am happy that you did enjoy...

[hcarson]

oh yes, memories of that are so clear..clearer now your poem brought more to mind..although even as a child i remember worrying how i would pay bills when i was older and things like that haha..i think i started worrying and stressing before i was even born! i do remember still though the days when those worries weren't there for a moment and everything was carefree as your poem says and summers seemed hotter and longer than they could ever possibly be...great :)...lovely poem that envokes some lovely memories for possible future inspiration, thank you for sharing, full marks :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

OHH.. THANKS AGAIN FOR THE REVIEW, I'LL TRY MY BEST TO READ YOUR POEMS TOO, AS I AM GOING TO START MY CLASS 10TH, I AM REALLY BUSY AND DON'T GET ENOUGH TIME TO EVEN READ THE REVIEWS... STILL, I'LL DO IT SOON.....

[hcarson]

thats ok , no worries, i was just enjoying reading yours...got a bit carried away haha

[unfathomd]

Hello poet! That was a beauty. There is something that I would like to suggest
"Remembering my child life...THE HAPPY DAYS..." this line sounds a bit odd. Well, that is just a suggestion. Even then, full marks :D

[Anindita Janhabee]

THANKS FOR YOUR TIME AND REVIEW TOO, VERY OFTEN I GET SUGGESTIONS SO THANKS A LOT...