Why...

Why...

A Poem by Jeannette Medlock
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Questions a curious women continues to ask on a daily, monthly, yearly basis believing she will ask until her ending day and hour in hopes that before she does she gets answers.

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Why...oh why oh dear may I ask these things
I daily fear nor dare to be no longer near
A curious mind unclear to total distraction that constantly battles in warfare to stay near.
Fear..from her beganing until a year made curious women's life completely impaired.
Bruised beat and abandoned, rejected, humiliated, mentally, physically, sexually, bullied in family in world daily, everyday from morning to night constantly abused.
She questions her curiosity as to why, what's this worth for me in this world I'm only used for me there's no use.

© 2016 Jeannette Medlock


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Another thought provoking piece of poetry... I believe at a certain moment of our life we find ourselves asking questions like these, we even question our worth because of the heavy burden the world has put on our shoulders... It's a very thoughtful write with a balance and nice rhyme scheme... Lovely... Full ratings...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannette Medlock

8 Years Ago

Awwe thank u so much. I'm a beginner so I feel happy to know other great writers are liking mines fo.. read more



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"beganing "

That's not a word silly.

You might want to throw in a comma between bruised and beat.

Not bad, makes you think. Not a completely coherent poem though. For poetry that's not always such a bad thing.


Posted 8 Years Ago


A thought provoking poem. Unfortunately women are still abused in developed societies as well. The question does arise: " why am I used, for me there's no use"
A very nicely written poem

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannette Medlock

8 Years Ago

Thank you Shabeeh Haider! 💜
Another thought provoking piece of poetry... I believe at a certain moment of our life we find ourselves asking questions like these, we even question our worth because of the heavy burden the world has put on our shoulders... It's a very thoughtful write with a balance and nice rhyme scheme... Lovely... Full ratings...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannette Medlock

8 Years Ago

Awwe thank u so much. I'm a beginner so I feel happy to know other great writers are liking mines fo.. read more
These look questions of a person who has gone through trauma...To this person these questions are of utmost importance...i really like it... :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannette Medlock

8 Years Ago

Ria Carol!
Thank you so much for liking this poem and understanding the depth of its meaning.. read more
Ria Carol

8 Years Ago

I hope and wish from the bottom of my heart that you get the answers to your questions...also that y.. read more

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Added on April 16, 2016
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Jeannette Medlock
Jeannette Medlock

Los Angeles, CA



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I'm a bit different than the world, others see me as strange, aggressive and outspoken to what my mind, heart and spirit desires to let out of my mouth. Imagination is indeed the key in my life that c.. more..

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