Goodbye Sister

Goodbye Judy 
Time stopped the moment I heard
The words " she's gone.
The room I stood in, I felt grew
Darker when her breath stopped.
I leaned over and held her in my arms
I had been close by her side, when 
She passed.
I watched as the color quickly left
Her face and lips.
There was nothing I could do to
Change death.
I said so long and kissed the still warm 
Skin on her whitened cheek
Her body was so still when her
Spirit left.

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

Powerfully written, this sad experience is one that's well know to many of us--especially the ones like me who've been on earth a good while. So I've found, the world is never the same without them, and we're ever mindful of the empty space they leave behind.

[Woody]

this sad but simple and well penned. I'm sorry for your loss.

[wordman]

this is a touching write,we all go through this in our lives
it doesn't get any easier it leaves an empty space in our hearts