A Perfect Day

Don't let the hate of others destroy your spirit

We hide inside our little homes

For we are young and scared

We open arms and minds and legs

But burry our heads in games

 

We hide behind the broken glass

By far the worst of all

We hide here all alone and now

We are afraid to fall

 

The world is full and ahead of us

However, empty in our soul

We bend and break for them again

Before we feel the cold

 

We look in front of us

It’s our time to break loose

We search for that is not lies

Trying to see the truth

 

It is our chance to shine

The ones with love and lit

It’s our chance to be the ones

We can only now see it

 

We seek for our own freedom

They laugh and fully say

A day with no suffers or pain

There is no thing as such a day

 

They want success and money

I want to live a perfect day

They want gold and treasure

However, that is not our way

 

We’ll prove for once and for all

Despite their laughs and hate  

A day like that does exist

Because, perfect is our fate

 

 

Author's Note

Enjoy and comment!

Reviews

[Andrew Nelson Stewart]

"We look in front of us
It’s our time to break loose
We search for that is not lies
Trying to see the truth". I say everyday is the invention of the new and here what I read is very relatable . Trying to define ourselves while living in a world that breaks you and what we have to carry is valuable pain. But you wrote beautifully and felt every word here very deeply. I recommend you listen to this one song It's called: No one is to Blame by Howard Jones . Here's a link to it https://youtu.be/V-A6WH1kQLc.
If it doesn't work search the name . The song is about unfulfilled attractions, saying that they're normal and commonplace ("We want everyone - no one ever is to blame"). It uses a number of metaphors, such as "You can look at the menu, but you just can't eat" and "It's the last piece of the puzzle, but you just can't make it fit," to describe the frustration of experiencing attraction but being unable to act on it, for whatever reason. On a deeper level it describes the frustration and pain of unfulfilled desires and dreams inherent in the human condition. And keep writing thought to share this poetic song . Thanks for the read request. You have the soul in your writing!.

Sincerely Your friend in writing and life.

[Firemay]

Thank you so much!! i'll listen to it right away

[Cass Morgan]

I really loved the message you portrayed in this poem. We want so much more than we actually have, that we don't stop and enjoy what we do have. The simplest things can sometimes bring the greatest pleasure. Thank you for sharing!

[Firemay]

thank you so much! i was also implying that we are to stubborn to chase after money and afraid of the upper laws that we don't look and understand what we have infront of us

[hcarson]

this is real good! like i said we are our own worst critics and at times don't realize just how good something is , full marks :)

[Firemay]

Thank you!!! It's good to know someone gets what i meant.

[AaronFreitas]

An awesome write Firemay :) I really enjoy your style... great write :)

[Firemay]

thank you so much!

[Inject Positivity]

This is truly inspiring my dear poetess....So true....Loved every word of it....It is a " made my day" kind of poem.....Clappings!!!!....Full ratings!!!!!

[Firemay]

you're too kind :)
Thank you so much, I'm happy it made your day!

[Inject Positivity]

Yes it did my dear sweet frnd....You are welcome with a big heart....Thanks for sharing mate....

[Gee]

Liked the poem,cadence a bit off,but nothing that a wee bit of tweaking wouldn't sort.I wish that at your age I possessed the ability you have.

[Firemay]

Thank you so much!

[Sarah King]

good rhyme, good poem. well done honey!

[Firemay]

Thank you!!!

[JMaster1]

you are wonderful poet , I love every word you write

[Firemay]

Ohhhh thank you darling!!!