We have never met

there's always a light at the end of the tunnel

We have never met

We are like a flower

Not a puzzle

But a set

To the high, high tower

There's a time

That I should go

It's very near

So near

You should know

 

The falling snow

Upon our faces

  Gives us hope

To grow

And at the end

I shall say

Hello friend

Hello May

 

Author's Note

Please enjoy and leave a review / comment so i can improve. Thank you, it is much appreciated.

Reviews

[Shabeeh Haider]

Sweet and with a longing to meet someone who has become important without having met you.
Nicely written.

[Firemay]

thanl youu!!

[zaisham9393]

This is a really sweet poem.I enjoyed reading it.
Thank You so much :))!

[iamshadowine]

a really sweet poem! i loved these lines very,very much!
"We have never met
We are like a flower
Not a puzzle
But a set"
keep writing :D

[Firemay]

Haha, thank you!
Glad you like it!
Don't worry i will!

[mou]

it has a light of hope..
it energies the reader with the positive environment and
I really like the style of this write..

[Firemay]

Thank you!!!

[mou]

you're welcome :)

[Flutterby aish]

The style is different and its quite nice. It's a short piece that i found impressive. Good going. Keep writing!

[Firemay]

Haha, thank you! It's one of my first poems...
Don't worry, I will!!

[Flutterby aish]

That was pretty good for a first! ;)

[Firemay]

Not the first, but one of my firsts.. haha.
Of course, i wrote some horrible ones i don't remember when i was younger, but i don't count them as poems...

[Inject Positivity]

A lovely write, very unique concept.....I love the shortness and the way it speaks to the reader with a deep meaning.....There is a sweetness in it and as you have said there is always a light at the end of the tunnel.....Clappings!!!! Full ratings!!!!

[Firemay]

Thank you, i enjoy it when people actually understand what's the meaning behind what i am writing so thank you so much for that.

[Aman samrat khare (ASK)]

We have never met but i tell you're doing great work thanks for sharing

[Firemay]

haha!! Love the word play! thank you so much

[Lavorther]

Very interesting rhyming schedule, although I was unable to really work out what it was. Some words just rhymed, some didn't. And that's fine with poetry, as there are no rules that say how it needs to rhyme, or if it should rhyme at all.

The flow and rhythm were very good too, and it read pretty easily. Also, I loved those last four lines.

[Firemay]

I realize it's hard for some people to understand and a lot don't get it. I used the metaphor of the month as a way to look at life. The snow that falls on our faces gives hope that the dark and stormy night have some magic in them and that the "winter" will soon be over and in it's place the "spring" will come. I hope you understand it better now.. :)