The Fall

A Poem by JaneFoxscale

What's the worst that can happen?

The fall is terrifying
The fall is gut defying
The fall will pass you by
The fall; you might just fly.

© 2016 JaneFoxscale

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Sangeetha

a poem about love or maybe a crush i presume? very short and sweet and the words you chose were very impactful and very relatable very good work.

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

Thank you. Really, I wrote it to try to speak to all situations, and I love how everyone perceives i.. read more

8 Years Ago

Of course it was really good and I love how you made something so small have a big purpose in the se.. read more

A simple quartet. We all do fall in life. We never know if we will crash and burn or soar to greater heights.

A short and sweet verse, Jane.

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear Doodley!

mou

REALLY BITTER TRUTH NEEDS ONLY FEW WORDS TO BE EXPRESSED !

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

Why thank You!

Nicole Schuster

When I saw the title, I thought it was going to be long and descriptive, but I was pleasantly surprised that it was short and sweet. I really like this work - it expresses many different emotions and reactions to 'the fall', and the to-the-point was clever. Nice job :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much!

Riddhi

I really liked this poem..Its a short , simple and sweet poem...Thanks for sharing and keep it up...

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

Thank you riddhi!

Cocopuffles123

Short but sweet! I like the flying part, because it's kids like a metaphor, when you fall for so long, if feels like your flying. Just somthing to to think about.