finally You

finally You

A Poem by Jamie Starlight

Dark rimmed eyes
But oh so bright
With that contrasted personality
You stand out in the corner
The outcast that’s loved
The unreserved introvert
The depressed dreamer
The intelligent fool
The clingy loner
The loser that’s cool
Without direction you’re everywhere
You have nothing you want to be
So you’re everything
One day the villain
Next, the hero
Later, nothing
After, above it all
Finally, you
At least until tomorrow

© 2015 Jamie Starlight


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Your writing seems pretty deep and advanced for someone who is only 17. Its very meaningful and has such depth behind the words. I enjoyed reading this, your pretty talented.
Keep writing :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jamie Starlight

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
cimmy wuv xxxooo

8 Years Ago

Anytime :)
Did you write this about me? I gave me chills. I was the hero now a villain, once a lover now I hate. I hide alone hoping for a better day. Great poem. Good work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jamie Starlight

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Added on October 15, 2015
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Tags: imagination, villian, hero, loser, cool, depressed, dreamer, unreserved, introvert, outcast, loved, dark rimmed eyes, dark, bright, you, character, madeup, fun, corner, personality

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Jamie Starlight
Jamie Starlight

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Hello Friends, My name is Jamie, I like to write poems and sometimes short stories. I don't have a strict routine at the moment and I usually end up writing when I'm inspired, but I hope t.. more..

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