The Crimson HoodA Story by JamieDBA subverted version of the classic tale Red Riding HoodThe Crimson Hood The mists had drifted through the ever darkening cracks of
the forest for generations. Only the glistening shards of light that glided
through the branches were capable of penetrating the thick fog. The land was
untouched by humanity completely apart from a singular well-worn dirt path, so
narrow that a bulky stead would have trouble passing through without brushing
up against the damp leaves that towered above at either side. The everlasting
cold travelled up and down the path at all times, penetrating through to the
souls of anyone that came into contact with it. Although visibility was so minimal that the lone traveller
would not be able to see its hand before it face, the vibrancy of a crimson red
hood could just be seen shimmering in the gentle breeze; advancing slowly and
purposefully, it was proceeded by an uncomfortable warmth that hadn’t been felt
for many moons. The hooded figure slowly and deliberately placed one foot
ahead of the other with complete precision. Taking in any changes surrounding
them, no matter how small they may have been. The forest fell silent as the
figure moved, almost as if everything was intimidated by its presence. All that
could be heard was the slight crunch of snow as the figure stepped forth
through the night. A small wooden structure that appeared to have one been
resemblant of a humble cottage, the Hood new the spot and the cold hearts that
had once inhabited it many years previously. The Hood stood, frozen completely except for a singular small
twitch inside of the hood. For a moment, even time froze as the world held its
breath in anticipation. With a flitter of noise followed by the rustle of the
hood settling once more. The figure stared into the thick darkness of the
forest, into the heart of fear. Even light was not daring enough to look into
the depths. Moments later, the Hood was faced against a tall and
masculine man, a mane of hair, thick and black resting atop of his shoulders.
Accompanied by the ragged and torn clothing of a traveller who had never found
his home. His eyes locked with the darkness that laid beneath the hood. What
had begun as a look of power and determination, deteriorated in an instant,
replaced by an image that could only be perceived as the epitome of horror. With a snarl, the dark figure lunged forward, revealing the glint
of a blade as he did. In a moment he stood a few steps past the hooded figure;
a smile started to encroach on the man’s face, no one had survived his attack
before and never would. A wisp of silk flittered in the wind and over his
shoulder, falling to the ground like a line of blood. Only one set of footprints left that cottage on this
particular night. The wolves cried out in pain, distraught that life could be
so vicious. As the sun glistened over the horizon, attempting to break up the
mist that forever encompassed the entirety of the forest. Yet the usual squawk
of crows and cries of ravens was no-where to be heard, it was nothing if not
unsettling. Over the horizon, a lone figure dressed in black slowly made its
way closer towards the village that the hooded character had originally been
heading in the direction of. An old and hagged lady lay peacefully in her bed, enjoying
the small comforts in a world that had so regularly beaten her down into the
dirt. For a moment, her window quickly fogged and the image of a face was
visible for a brief moment, once more the world appeared to have sunk deep into
silence, before a faint grunt could be heard from behind the thick, toughened
mahogany door, proceeded by the daunting lone sound of heavy panting. The Grandmother sat up in her bed stiffly, staring intently
at the solid wood in which separated her from the unknown beyond that life so
often presented. With a thunderous crack and boom, the usually heavy door,
leapt from its hinges as if a toy of a child; smashing and splintering against the
wall that stood opposite it. In place of where the door had once stood was the
menacing silhouette of a spectacular figure, hands by its side but extending
from those fingers, claws that protruded, threatening the air around it through
its inhuman sharpness. There was not but a flinch from the Grandmother as she calmly
observed the events that were taking place. Before raising a bronze blunderbuss
from beneath her sheets and dispatching the figure with a cloud of red mist and
not a moment of hesitation or doubt. “You really ought to take better care of your pets’ m’dear” Behind the collapsed figure stood the red Hood, a slowly
fading smile on her face, the glint of a fang with a drop of crimson blood
dropping into the snow at her feet, before spreading around the immediate
vicinity. Lowering her hood the young girl stepped into the room with a
beat too her step. “Sorry Grandma, I simply couldn’t resist.” The pale girl sat at the foot of the bed and pulled a bowl of
soup from her coat handing it over to her grandmother, watching the small smile
of joy expand on her countenance. © 2015 JamieDB |
StatsAuthorJamieDBLeeds, Yorkshire, United KingdomAboutNot any good, but feel like it quite relaxing and enjoyable to make up some little worlds. more..Writing
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