Discrete...

Feeling down...

Discrete...

When my eyes leak and my heart skips a beat
I try so hard to be discrete even when the pain peaks,

I feel down but never out
I get energized by this pain and instead of pout I want
to scream and shout,

But I stay discrete because I don't want to repeat the
mistakes I've made in the past the same mistakes that
bit me in the a*s,

I try to learn from my past mistakes
and not make them again so I just pretend everything is
okay because eventually tomorrow will be a new day,

One day that pain will hide itself just like I hide my frustration
so I just stay patient knowing that the smile will return and I won't
want to hide like the sun behind a cloud my frown will be turned upside
down,

So for now I will stay discrete
I will let the pain peak
I will let my eyes leak
I will be okay cause tomorrow is a new day...

Author's Note

Not everyday is a good day, but God is always good!!!

Reviews

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As down as we can find ourselves sometimes it's always good to keep that bottle of hope in the cupboard for when we need it most. Well-done, James.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[fattycbreezy52]

What a lovely dose of optimism to start your day with.This motivation promises us a clear tomorrow where there will be the homecoming of those lost warrior pouts;D
Good job

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[R Smith]

very true James, tomorrow will come shining as always :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[child of God]

Well said my friend this is beautiful

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[andrew mitchell]

Very nice flow Jamestown and there's always a new day so to speak!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Robert]

Flowed very well James and hope in the last line which I like.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Kajal Sharma]

that was really good one...relates to everyone out there...good job

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[A. H. Pinley]

Nice flow to your piece. Stay with it...

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Mitali Shah]

Wow James. like your quality of being positive no matter what life offers you. Keep it up...
I will let the pain peak
I will let my eyes leak
I will be okay cause tomorrow is a new day...

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[AaronFreitas]

These hard times come and go brother... stay strong with time it will pass :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!