Discrete...

Discrete...

A Poem by Jamestown
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Feeling down...

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Discrete...

When my eyes leak and my heart skips a beat
I try so hard to be discrete even when the pain peaks,

I feel down but never out
I get energized by this pain and instead of pout I want
to scream and shout,

But I stay discrete because I don't want to repeat the
mistakes I've made in the past the same mistakes that
bit me in the a*s,

I try to learn from my past mistakes
and not make them again so I just pretend everything is
okay because eventually tomorrow will be a new day,

One day that pain will hide itself just like I hide my frustration
so I just stay patient knowing that the smile will return and I won't
want to hide like the sun behind a cloud my frown will be turned upside
down,

So for now I will stay discrete
I will let the pain peak
I will let my eyes leak
I will be okay cause tomorrow is a new day...

© 2015 Jamestown


Author's Note

Jamestown
Not everyday is a good day, but God is always good!!!

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Yes God is good and all the time God is good.You have expressed a perfect example of accepting what comes and placing it in the hands of God to assist you in sorting it out.

Bill

Posted 8 Years Ago


lovely poem, stay strong!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like this.
It is very good. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like the choice of words. Keep it up! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


You have a very straight toward approach in this poem that counter balances the title and theme wonderfully. Nice work! Thanks for rr, and sharing your artistry.

Peace, Todd

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review b-blessed!
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Leo
There's a famous saying from the Abrahamic religions along the lines of: 'when a sinner repents he seeks "discretion" and does not boast about his dark past so that God will pave a new righteous path for him..having said that your heartfelt words and use of metaphors echoed and resonated with me to the core.. your poem spoke to my heart soul and spirit .. discretion as God fearing person myself and a sinner is a powerful subject expressed eloquently and beautifully by a powerful writer yourself.. well-penned!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks again, I truly appreciate your insight:)
I enjoy knowing that people with different b.. read more
Great job as always Jamestown. Indeed there is healing in letting things out sometimes. Good bless

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Many emotions flow through this good write;]

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Another well-crafted piece James. I'm a sucker for rhymes and you delivered on this one. Great job brother. Cheers!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed
Lovely :)

Funny at parts, serious in others.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

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Added on August 4, 2015
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Jamestown
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Denver, CO



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