A River Runs Through...

Flowing Love...

A River Runs Through...

I am mesmerized by the overwhelming beauty of the great Colorado River,

So powerful, but yet so pleasant and also great in stature,

As I soak in all of it's glory I keep imagining my heart being so similar in so
many ways,

The water raging throughout the river walls, reminds me of my cascading love
flowing from my heart throughout my friends and family,

Sometimes even overflowing on to the dry land as my love will also do to people
whom are unaware of why I love them,

I am proud to have this river as I see it running through my body and pray I will find
a way to preserve it,

God knows that love is the answer to everything, but God also knows that hate is always
present trying to dam that beautiful flowing river a.s.a.p.

I am aware of it's presents and I try with every once of strength to let my love flow freely
even when family, friends, work, or even everyday passerby's try to beaver a home in the
middle of my bloody river,

So I encourage you too also allow your love to flow freely like the oh so powerful but pleasant
Colorado River,

I am positive that there are many out there that really and truly need to get wet,
a river runs through you too...

Author's Note

ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BE TO GOD!!!

Reviews

[mournful bear]

good pen! love is all you need to be successful in life. let it also flow to the one we don't see or over look, the snail on the side walk, the birds singing for seeds, show them love and yeh will prosper

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[jeannemarie coulter]

I am aware of it's presents and I try with every once of strength to let my love flow freely
even when family, friends, work, or even everyday passerby's try to beaver a home in the
middle of my bloody river, ...
i think you have the wrong word here, should read "I am aware of its presence..." (it's means it is, its is the possessive and presents means gifts and presence is being there)

good write otherwise..

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your helpful hints, b-blessed!

[Mara]

Beautiful write
Thanks for sharing:)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Cherry Pepperweb]

The might river of life which nourishes all that is good within us.
Lovely work!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Olivia]

As a fellow river lover, I really enjoyed this poem. Nice job.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

A river of feelings is running through me too, I try to write them down but words are sometimes not enough. Well done. :) Rudi

[Jamestown]

Totally understand!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Crispy]

A river indeed. Sometimes I feel it rage and pour through me with inspiration, and at other times it seems dammed off behind a wall of restless distractions, like so many tangled sticks piled high by your noted beaver.

A roaring source of inspiration. Thank you~

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

RiVER Run!!!
Awesome write dude.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Mitali Shah]

So kind of you James. loved it. God bless u :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Robert]

This was a very revealing poem about who you are James, thanks for sharing that with us. And a very positive message to share with others in the hope they can be this way also. I really enjoyed reading this.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!