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A River Runs Through...

A River Runs Through...

A Poem by Jamestown
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Flowing Love...

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A River Runs Through...

I am mesmerized by the overwhelming beauty of the great Colorado River,

So powerful, but yet so pleasant and also great in stature,

As I soak in all of it's glory I keep imagining my heart being so similar in so
many ways,

The water raging throughout the river walls, reminds me of my cascading love
flowing from my heart throughout my friends and family,

Sometimes even overflowing on to the dry land as my love will also do to people
whom are unaware of why I love them,

I am proud to have this river as I see it running through my body and pray I will find
a way to preserve it,

God knows that love is the answer to everything, but God also knows that hate is always
present trying to dam that beautiful flowing river a.s.a.p.

I am aware of it's presents and I try with every once of strength to let my love flow freely
even when family, friends, work, or even everyday passerby's try to beaver a home in the
middle of my bloody river,

So I encourage you too also allow your love to flow freely like the oh so powerful but pleasant
Colorado River,

I am positive that there are many out there that really and truly need to get wet,
a river runs through you too...

© 2015 Jamestown


Author's Note

Jamestown
ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BE TO GOD!!!

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For me one of your best poems,love the comparisons,I think your friends lucky to have you share their lives.Well done JT

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Very electrifying write my friend rivers are powerful enough to start power plants for electricity

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Lovely flowing write, the river full of strength.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
This is an awesome piece buddy! Sorry for getting to it late I'm far behind on my requests again. "I am positive that there are many out there that really and truly need to get wet,
a river runs through you too..." I love those words my friend... you are inspiration buddy :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
I like the comparison you made with nature as water and love are powerful forces and both can do harm if not managed. I liked this JT

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Great poem, the river really douse run through. Check out the read request I sent you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
just a suggestion the water raging through river walls reminds me of my cascading love flowing through my heart towards my friends and family. What does it bring? Renewal? Peace?

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Just flowing love, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Hello JT, the mighty Colorado is pleasant indeed, this poem
reminds me of the movie A River Runs Through It, one of my
Faves,, thanks.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Nature is such an important part of all our lives and you incorporate it into your poetry beautifully. Lydi**

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
True power will always be loving and kind. Nice write revealing the flow of love and the damning nature of hate...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

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Added on July 19, 2015
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