Sun Smiling...

The Summer Sun...

Sun Smiling...

Today the suns summer rays brings
a bright smile to my face,

I feel the warmth of Gods good grace
and understand that time is not to waste,

As I embark on my day,I first pray
and give thanks to the Lord for this beautiful
day and his warm embrace,

With that being said "I just wish it was the Cali
sun that was giving me this hug, I am in Colorado
where the sun is referred to be smug,

The Coloradans love their Rocky Mountains,
and I don't blame them but I love my Cali sun,
I find all my fun in the sun, beaches and babes,
not necessarily in the Denver haze,

But today the sun is smiling and I'm a mile
closer I feel it's heat and am taken aback by
this Colorado treat,

So as of now I will join the radiant sun in it's
smiling, shinning, beauty but I will day dream
of Cali and the beach, later today, tomorrow and
everyday until my return, I long to be where my
heart truly belongs...

Author's Note

God is good!

Reviews

[Robert]

Nice flow to this piece James. I do like the rhythm and rhyme to it and the blessings you shared on this sunny day of yours and your thanks for having that sunny day. I am from SoCal born and raised. I don't live there anymore but I miss it immensely.

[Jamestown]

Me too,thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Melinda McQueen]

Sounds like you are homesick. Sweet whimsical write. Why are you in Colorado?

[Jamestown]

Work, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[W R Stowe]

The summer sun is mesmerizing and I know first hand how beautiful the Pacific ocean's sun set is like you I have to be content with Lake Erie here in Ohio.Keep my wife's visa in prayer God bless you

Bill

[Jamestown]

Will do thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[W R Stowe]

you to brother

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

The summer sun can do miracles when our heart and our feelings are frozen because of the dull autumn and the cold winter. It's my favorite season, James. Well done. :) Rudi

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[MsJewel]

A lovely poem to read on a sunny summer morning. Whether in Colorado or California - I'm sure the sun is warm and bright. You are welcome on my little California beach anytime James.

:) Julie

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind welcoming:)
I truly appreciate it, b-blessed!

[Ruth]

The sun can dramatically improve our health, mind and mood...I understand this piece...too short its presence, Autumn is already in the air here, this year has gone nowhere! Blessings Jamestown...

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Urja Gokani]

this piece of writing is beautiful amazingly written keep it up !!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Urja Gokani]

welcome :)

[Ben Noah Suri]

Nice write.... You differentiate the sun shining in the various regions and that caught my fancy. Nice...

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[andrew mitchell]

As always nicely penned and good content we all need sun. Nice work J

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[mournful bear]

it's always good to know where your heart is. nice penning. it's the small simple things in life that keep, and make, Us happy. the sun, the trees, the bird's whistle and the like.

[Jamestown]

Very true:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!