A dance in the wind...

The rhythm of life...

Dancing in the wind...

As the wind blows my blood flows and my
mind goes into a place only God knows,

And yet again we talk as his breathe pierces
my heart with the his tongue and his eyes of fire
scorch me the sun,

Only he knows what message I am to
learn after my soul has been burnt,

It seems like it's always his turn!!!

Why wouldn't it be you see, he and he only
knows the real me,

I no doubt trust thee, but often I close my
eyes and choose not to see even when
he is trying to guide me,

It's so obvious what I need to do
always stay in tune with my God
but easier said then done,when this old
dog wants to run,

I will always dance in the wind he
provides me and always reside with thee
I just pray that he will understand when I
choose to hide from thee,

I venture but never far enough for him to give
up on me and I will never give up on him
cause one day I will I literally be dancing with thee
in utter glee completely free...

Author's Note

ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BE TO CHRIST JESUS!

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

strong is your faith and creativity JT and nice work

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Lydia Shutter]

Your spirituality and deep faith allow you to write wonderful poetry. It is obvious you wrestle with your faith....which is important in life. Not to accept blindly shows you are smart and will follow the right path. I enjoyed reading this. Lydi**

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[sereenaoutloud]

Knowing what you have to do and doing it can be difficult at times and yes easier said than done, but your faith is so strong and you write about is beautifully and honestly!!
Love this James ! :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[xbxbzdvdsv]

I think this was beautiful. I love when people believe.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Ana B.]

I think God will always be hovering over such beauty...a marvelous creation my friend! My new favorite of yours.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[GreenEyedPoet]

You don't have to worry James, God will never give up on you even if you stray to far from Him.
He will always try to keep you close to Him. :)
Great piece James!

[Jamestown]

Gods grace is to good for any of us!
Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[GreenEyedPoet]

Yes it is, but that's what makes Him so wonderful, He still gives us His grace because He loves us. :)

[AaronFreitas]

"I venture but never far enough for you to give
up on me and I will never give up on you"
Those lines are also true for myself buddy... we can venture but we never let Him leave our heart. Great work :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and I agree we will never venture to far
that God doesn't understand it's us that doesn't understand, b-blessed!

[fattycbreezy52]

wow the last line can touch even the coldest of the hearts.The moment to seek some privacy from God and the request to make this possible itself knows that amidst any sort of privacy ,God has to reside.The union with God seems to be the most desirable wish on the part of every human being.
Amazing writeup James:)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!