A dance in the wind...

The rhythm of life...

Dancing in the wind...

As the wind blows my blood flows and my
mind goes into a place only God knows,

And yet again we talk as his breathe pierces
my heart with the his tongue and his eyes of fire
scorch me the sun,

Only he knows what message I am to
learn after my soul has been burnt,

It seems like it's always his turn!!!

Why wouldn't it be you see, he and he only
knows the real me,

I no doubt trust thee, but often I close my
eyes and choose not to see even when
he is trying to guide me,

It's so obvious what I need to do
always stay in tune with my God
but easier said then done,when this old
dog wants to run,

I will always dance in the wind he
provides me and always reside with thee
I just pray that he will understand when I
choose to hide from thee,

I venture but never far enough for him to give
up on me and I will never give up on him
cause one day I will I literally be dancing with thee
in utter glee completely free...

Author's Note

ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BE TO CHRIST JESUS!

Reviews

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genuine and heart-felt write about your faith, James... it is strong and it shines through in this piece... well-done

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Nice write man, thanks for sharing!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[R Smith]

always keep dancing James, the wind will carry you to the life you desire, I can see it coming soon, all the best my friend :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[B]

A great deal of love for god i see in this poem

I love how you cherish Christianity in your writes and your words

God bless your true love
and i love the freedom you display in your belief
truly honest in your ways :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[lovesrgraham]

Amazing poem. Yes, no one knows us better than He does. It's important for us to follow His guidance because He'll never steer us in the wrong direction, and though we may stray away, He's always there to help us get back on the right course. Very well written!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[lovesrgraham]

No problem, anytime!

[Mitali Shah]

Very well written James. Sometimes we feel like running away from the things happening with us but we fail to understand that its happening cz He wants us to learn and earn something better.

[Jamestown]

I agree completely, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[~]

This reminded me of the verse that those who trust in God will rise up with wings like Eagles. Yes, it is not easy indeed, but if it was why would we need His help?
A poem full of strong imagery and as always sincerity.
Blessings my friend! :D

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

We are not perfect, make mistakes, we do hide sometimes. We are only human. Thank you for sharing this poem, James. :) Rudi

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Melinda McQueen]

These words are true.. sometimes we want to run even though He has a say and we are in His hands.
Well penned.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[wordman]

i think wwe all can relate to this heartfelt write james,i know i can

[Jamestown]

Yep! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[wordman]

you are welcome james