Transparent...

A Poem by Jamestown

I see through your lies...

Transparent...

I see through your lies
and peer into those evil eyes
I'm sure your surprised that I'm not
falling for your demise,

You are as transparent as they come
I can't believe you tried playing me for dumb
you piece of scum, I laugh at people like you
peek a boo "I see you" and there is nothing that
is true about you,

Your fake is crystal clear no matter how you try
to appear, I see you for who you really are and your
not as smart as you think you are,

So come out of the closet and face the music
the lies are over done you abused them,
they are even sick of playing pretend don't you
want this nonsense to end,

I will never respect you but that shouldn't matter
I just pray one day you will respect yourself
you my friend need some professional help,

Transparent to everyone that knows you
the only one your fooling is yourself
and I know that's got to hurt no matter what
you say, come out of the closet and repent today...

© 2015 Jamestown

Author's Note

God is good!!!

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James

allow me to be the voice of reason - devils advocate Jamestown !!!
John 8:7
Matthew 7:1

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

I completely understand:( I needed a vent and I will forgive and move on
Thanks for checking .. read more

Sindu

So different from your usual works. But amazingly refreshing and true. Such people tear out the last thread of sanity with there drama. Way to show them their place, james. B-blessed :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

MsJewel

This is a change from your usual positive message, but I like it! Hopefully this person got the message!
Great vent James.

:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, I won't gget used to this tone, lol
b-blessed!

Pratik Mishra

The sarcastic tone that you have used is amazing! Really good work! Be blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

ANTO

Get it out of you JT! Vent that spleen my man !
B-Blessed. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Exactly venting to my mates at the WC, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

KWP

ouch - this is something different from your usual kind words James - packs a punch that's for sure - I have to wonder why this muse of your behaves as such - what is behind it all ?

great write my friend X

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Frustration for being lied too, I will forgive and move on
but this came to mind so I penned .. read more

mournful bear

as always great write!!!!!!! great lines! some people are so, in my life. they lie lie and think they can fool us, HE will see your lies and miss deeds. be blessed brother.

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

I agree completely, they are just fooling themselves, sad:(
Thanks for checking it out and b-.. read more

Pushkar Prabhat

WoW!!!
this has ammunition.......... scorn and disgust.......
awsome write!!!
i loved it!!!
:)

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

I try to always stay positive, but was irritated by someone around me that
continues to lie:(.. read more

9 Years Ago

negativity could also be refreshing once in a while........
always a pleasure Sir!!!
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fattycbreezy52

A great job with this James.
Hypocrites and liars deserve this. Being transparent was not there intention but their deeds are so crystal clear that their lies and deception are caught with time.
Enjoyed reading this:)

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

sereenaoutloud

Oh i love this , the title, the wording, everything is just fantastic! So talented you are... This is so strong and everything you said is so true.
Nothing worse than people who are fake. They are only fooling themselves as every relationship that they form will be based on lies.
"peek a boo "I see you" and there is nothing that is true about you,"
Just brilliant James! :)