Transparent...

Transparent...

I see through your lies
and peer into those evil eyes
I'm sure your surprised that I'm not
falling for your demise,

You are as transparent as they come
I can't believe you tried playing me for dumb
you piece of scum, I laugh at people like you
peek a boo "I see you" and there is nothing that
is true about you,

Your fake is crystal clear no matter how you try
to appear, I see you for who you really are and your
not as smart as you think you are,

So come out of the closet and face the music
the lies are over done you abused them,
they are even sick of playing pretend don't you
want this nonsense to end,

I will never respect you but that shouldn't matter
I just pray one day you will respect yourself
you my friend need some professional help,

Transparent to everyone that knows you
the only one your fooling is yourself
and I know that's got to hurt no matter what
you say, come out of the closet and repent today...

Author's Note

God is good!!!

Reviews

[R Smith]

wow! James you really hit someone squared between the eyes, i can't even begin to imagine what they did, but your anger makes for truly passionate writing, so very well done :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks just a vent:( Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Great Aunt Astri]

Perhaps she was just insecure! Your poem was good, but I would have liked a bit of kindness at the end!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[B]

Wow
Very nicely penned
I hear you loud and clear

But ...... even those who are fake can learn to be real
When you give that person something real
I dunno i could be wrong

Good job James

[Jamestown]

Absolutely:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Good poem, James. Thank you for sharing. :) Rudi

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Valentine]

It takes all kinds of people to make up the world. I take this differently as where I live being in the closet means one thing. I am not sure if that is what you were writing about. Valentine

[Jamestown]

Just talking about a deception going on around me,
Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Jordan]

I think "you retard" throws off the flow. Other than that I liked it. Very coffeehouse confessional.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind hint, I appreciate it b-blessed!

[Jordan]

lol anytime

[Zac]

This poem is very well put together
Hope to read more.

[Jamestown]

Thanks again and b-blessed!

[~]

Ohh.. the sting of being lied to, the ugliness of deception, the unrepentant heart... ughh, sorry for the brokenness of the heart.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your support, b-blessed!

[Double T]

This is good stuff right here. It kind of reminds me of a poem I wrote Masterpiece conspiracy.

[Jamestown]

I will read for sure:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[A. H. Pinley]

Sounds like the mask of addiction and temptation?

[Jamestown]

Could be? Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!