I CRY 4U...

I CRY 4U...

I cry for you
I would die for you
I would never lie to you
I want to fly with you,

I want to be with you
and take away all of your blues
my love for you is as true as
my eyes are blue,

I want to love and hold you
I want to grow old with you
I want to console you,

But for now I cry for you
because I can't find you
and I know your in need of me too,

Please sweetheart don't loose hope
cause I promise I will find you,
I will die for you and one day soon I
will breathe life into you,

You will see that I love you
that I have always wanted and needed
you, that I have been seeking you
and that my love for you is true...

Author's Note

All in due time!
GOD IS GOOD!!!

Reviews

[Alexandre Camillo Sallu..]

Hello Jamestown! The poem sends a note of desperation, very well done in this sense, but the repeated use of the word "you" made it become boring to read about halfway through...maybe you could find other words and rhymes with other sounds! Sorry for being brutally honest :) Congrats, still a very good work!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out,b-blessed!

[....................]

Words of promised love to that one person who is waiting to be found... well-done, James.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Arunima]

A perfect poem to dedicate to any of our loved ones.....simple yet cathartic!!!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Ehra Khan]

This could be a reference to anyone! your wife/girlfriend/child/god even! it's an absolutely divine write! loved it:)

[Jamestown]

Absolutely! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[B]

Your soul mate
I see this as a call out for her

VEry kind to the soul
Lovely

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[B]

My pleasure James

[MsJewel]

Beautiful and heartfelt words James. You have a wonderful gift.

:) Julie

[Jamestown]

Thanks again and b-blessed!

[mournful bear]

GREAT WRITE!!!!!!! a lot of heart!! a lot of emotion!! great to feel like that for some one.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[AaronFreitas]

Another beautiful piece... "But for now I cry for you
because I can't find you
and I know your in need of me too,"

I love those lines... I can relate my friend. Good work!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[nazia]

Seems like love is in the air for you.. True love will surely come to you, when the right time come. Till then keep celebrating this love :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!