I CRY 4U...

I CRY 4U...

A Poem by Jamestown
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4U...

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I CRY 4U...

I cry for you
I would die for you
I would never lie to you
I want to fly with you,

I want to be with you
and take away all of your blues
my love for you is as true as
my eyes are blue,

I want to love and hold you
I want to grow old with you
I want to console you,

But for now I cry for you
because I can't find you
and I know your in need of me too,

Please sweetheart don't loose hope
cause I promise I will find you,
I will die for you and one day soon I
will breathe life into you,

You will see that I love you
that I have always wanted and needed
you, that I have been seeking you
and that my love for you is true...

© 2015 Jamestown


Author's Note

Jamestown
All in due time!
GOD IS GOOD!!!

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Your putting your feelers out there in a lovely poem that needs and wants love.NOW!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Beautiful love poem for your soulmate who you will meet.
A good one.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
This is a great love poem.If you love someone you will do anything. nice write my friend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
But for now I cry for you
because I can't find you
and I know your in need of me too,
I could relate it..... Beautifully written ....


Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
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Yes, good things are always worth waiting for :D
Hang in there my friend and your sincerity will find its own friend!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
This is a lovely yet sends a kind of sad thing poem...
I really like it, it really made me calm myself a little as I read it, it made me feel like I was drifting away.
This is a good poem James, I missed your poems but now I'm back at reviewing.
Great work on this one.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Welcome back my talented friend, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Oh how I know this feeling. You feel the tension in your soul.. But to whom? The wait seems endless...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

It does feel endless sometimes:( Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
excellent work James, love the repetitive phrases, it works so well because the other lines contain such power of expression, well done :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
A wonderful poem which explains the immense love for a loved one. Nicely written Jamestown :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Patience...
Trust all of us who have been there and done that.
Wait for the right 'one' and settle for none other.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Great advice:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

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Jamestown

Denver, CO



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