Love Crime...

Love Crime...

If love is a crime,
then I am guilty as charged,
and will most definitely do the time,
being with you is absolutely sublime,

I will do 10 to life by your side,
and enjoy every minute of this love ride,

Time flies when having fun,
so you and I will never have to run,
because when we're together it's always
fun in the sun and we've just begun,

I will only love you even more as time goes on,
I may even write you a song that tells everyone
how much we belong together in any kind of weather,
and how I will never allow this tie to be severed,

So if my love for you is a crime,
then grab the cuffs and lock me up,
this love is not a bluff, I understand that times
will get rough but I love you and if you look into
my baby blues you will know I'm telling the truth,

If love is a crime,
I'm guilty as charged,
and ready to serve my time...

Author's Note

GOD IS GOOD!

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

Whooo spittin fire today James! Loved it buddy... loved the concept, the rhyming and the flow of the write. Great work buddy!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[alf]

Hi James. Wow!!! This is beauuuuuuuuuuuuuutiful. I just love those internal rhymes that hold such mastery over!!!!! each one is slotted into the exact place it needs to be and enhances your every write. Go man! this is wonderful stuff!!!!!!!!!! alf

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate your reviews always!

[alf]

You are such an undercover romantic!!!!!!!

[Jamestown]

I'm not trying to be:) I love to love and be loved, who doesn't right...

[alf]

There is always a time for everyone. When your time is right, I shall envy the lady who takes your soul to heaven!!! (lol)

[Jamestown]

All in due time and I appreciate your lovely gesture,
that truly touched my heart, Thank you!!!

[Fran Marie]

A lovely love poem. Displaying eternal devotion..nicely worded..

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[wordman]

if loving you is wrong,then i don`t want to be right

[Jamestown]

You said it perfectly, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Amazing write James! I couldn't agree more!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Etta Beasley]

Deliciously romantic, and I've completely fallen for it.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Ishita Dixit]

Beautiful poem this!
If love is a crime,
i am guilty as charged.
^amazing lines!
Nicely done my friend!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Melinda McQueen]

What a sweet poem. I enjoyed it very much.
The lady you write for will be so blessed.

[Jamestown]

Just writing for now:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[~]

There are many crimes in this world, but never love when it is its most purest of forms. Yet, i do like your analogy to being imprisoned and willingly serving the time. make sure she is in the same cell ;);)

[Jamestown]

Right,lol:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!