Love Crime...

Love Crime...

If love is a crime,
then I am guilty as charged,
and will most definitely do the time,
being with you is absolutely sublime,

I will do 10 to life by your side,
and enjoy every minute of this love ride,

Time flies when having fun,
so you and I will never have to run,
because when we're together it's always
fun in the sun and we've just begun,

I will only love you even more as time goes on,
I may even write you a song that tells everyone
how much we belong together in any kind of weather,
and how I will never allow this tie to be severed,

So if my love for you is a crime,
then grab the cuffs and lock me up,
this love is not a bluff, I understand that times
will get rough but I love you and if you look into
my baby blues you will know I'm telling the truth,

If love is a crime,
I'm guilty as charged,
and ready to serve my time...

Author's Note

GOD IS GOOD!

Reviews

[Double T]

Your poem is so good that I would have the courage to shead tear. Although I don't shead a tear, I feel the emotion of it.

Your writing is amazing. :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Brielle Cartny]

I really like this!!Very well done !

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[ANTO]

The concept of this and the execution generated a big old wry grin here JT. Very clever and fun - But when one knows an author as well as I know you by now I also get the poignant undercurrent. Well done my friend. :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[andrew mitchell]

Such honest conviction with this write of thoughts as you lay your love on the line on what you believe and stand by. A good write Jamestown!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Deepika]

Amazing work james :) Unique idea indeed!
"So if my love for you is a crime,
then grab the cuffs and lock me up,"--beautiful lines that perfectly suits the title.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Ruth]

You have a lovely energy within this...love is to be truly delved in to with heart and soul, wonderful piece :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Ashadan]

If love is a crime,
I'm guilty as charged,
and ready to serve my time...

I like on how this poem started as well as the closing lines. Thanks for sharing =)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[sereenaoutloud]

Oh your flow is always perfect..you feel it as you read your beautiful words!
I agree with Alf you do have a sweet romantic side to you that shines in this write.
Love this ..!!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[B]

who is in love .....

You are in love and speak so easily of it

A stunning piece we got here

And i truly enjoyed each line

We all don't mind doing time for this gorgeous crime ....

[Jamestown]

I agree:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[B]

That's beautiful :)

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Very well done, James. :) Rudi

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!