Love Crime...

Love Crime...

If love is a crime,
then I am guilty as charged,
and will most definitely do the time,
being with you is absolutely sublime,

I will do 10 to life by your side,
and enjoy every minute of this love ride,

Time flies when having fun,
so you and I will never have to run,
because when we're together it's always
fun in the sun and we've just begun,

I will only love you even more as time goes on,
I may even write you a song that tells everyone
how much we belong together in any kind of weather,
and how I will never allow this tie to be severed,

So if my love for you is a crime,
then grab the cuffs and lock me up,
this love is not a bluff, I understand that times
will get rough but I love you and if you look into
my baby blues you will know I'm telling the truth,

If love is a crime,
I'm guilty as charged,
and ready to serve my time...

Author's Note

GOD IS GOOD!

Reviews

[Mitali Shah]

Lovely poem James. Love is pure, serene and divine. Nothing can replace all the feelings it gives you with the best moments for a lifetime. Loved it

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[J Todd Underhill]

Would love for you to share a work tonight on www.worldpoetryopenmic.net it's a radio poetry show based out of Denver. 720-240-9766 is the call in line 8pm Mountain time Fridays!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Ana B.]

Sweet and beautiful, reminding of a blessed purity. Wonderful write my friend :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Olando Lucas]

Thanks for the reading of my writings. .I enjoyed this poem a lot.. I try to write love poems and it always seems to turn into sorrow poems..You are great at expressing that emotion..I am looking forward to reading All of your writings..
God Bless You

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[K.M]

This poem relates to me a lot... high school is um weird

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Jamestown]

Thanks again, read I♡HATERS I'm sure you will enjoy that one as well:)

[D.T.]

This is really sweet and was pleasant to read. Very good poem.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Relic]

Your metaphor is appropriate to your subject. Who would not be found guilty of a love with that kind of evidence. :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[RiverRei]

I'll do more than 10 to life, I'll do 3 lifetime sentences! lol. Very cute piece. I love when you write about love like this, it's so cute and romantic. Makes me have butterflies. Another wonderful piece my friend, thank you very much for sharing it with me :)

[Jamestown]

I'm really happy you enjoyed, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[TheOne&Only]

Awww.. man I loved this!! Great write!!!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[child of God]

I love the rhyme scheme and the love is a beautiful thing that god shares with us thank you for sharing my friend it was a wonderful read

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!