Tickles my ear...

Spring fever...

Tickles my ear...

The brisk spring breeze tickles my ear,
then a vision of my soul mate magically appears,
as my eyes then puddle with tears, her beauty all
of the sudden disappears,

The games my mind keep playing are no doubt
very draining, but longing for the love of my life
just keeps replaying, when we are finally together
I will realize it was worth all of the waiting, but for
now I continue praying and anticipating,

One day it will be my lady that tickles my ear,
and it won't be a dream because she will always
be near, then my mind will be crystal clear and my
love will be mirrored, all because I had nothing but
faith that God would bring her here...

Author's Note

GOD IS GOOD!

Reviews

[....................]

Love the movement in this piece, James, and especially the change from the tickling of a spring breeze to the promise of a loved on tickling the ear. A nice write my friend.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Etta Beasley]

Another great one Jamestown.. "then my mind will be crystal clear and my / love will be mirrored, all because I had nothing but / faith that God would bring her here..." What a perfect message here. If God's willing, love will be here for us all one day :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[B]

God is great
And she does appear doesn't she

I loved this piece
Very much fun of your longing for that special one

[Jamestown]

Thanks again, I am patiently waiting:)
God knows what's best!

[B]

Agreed
Shes coming your way

[alf]

Ho Wow!!! James this is great!!!! You are entering a new phase here, my man!!!! I'm not sure when this happened but these last two poems have taken a melancholy tone that tears at the heart, and makes the reader want to matters in hand and bring you an your soul mate together. This so appealing to the inner soul!!! Love that internal rhyming you use, and use better than anyone else I've read on this site!!! Love it!!! Just love it, alf

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, I appreciate your support:)

[alf]

Never kind, James, just painfully honest!!!!

[~]

Ahhh, yes. Here you are my friend. Spreading all your romantic beams all over us. Shine away an dkeep the faith. The time is coming closer :)

[Jamestown]

For sure:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Ana B.]

Beautiful words about love and adoration......gorgeous :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[andrew mitchell]

Keep the faith Jamestown. A lovely warm write and may she give you lots of tickles!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[KWP]

Another lovely write of yours in search of your other half :) Endearing and Enduring is what I got - you must never give up when love fills your heart as such - for she is just around the corner - I like the rhythmic feel to this one XX

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review:)

[KWP]

pleasure my friend XX

[sereenaoutloud]

This is not only romantic and beautiful it is also so strong with the message of keeping the faith and hope! Brilliant James I love it!!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome work James! Another beautiful piece... you can never go wrong when your faith is strong... He will guide you to happiness :)

[Jamestown]

I completely agree! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!