Tickles my ear...

Spring fever...

Tickles my ear...

The brisk spring breeze tickles my ear,
then a vision of my soul mate magically appears,
as my eyes then puddle with tears, her beauty all
of the sudden disappears,

The games my mind keep playing are no doubt
very draining, but longing for the love of my life
just keeps replaying, when we are finally together
I will realize it was worth all of the waiting, but for
now I continue praying and anticipating,

One day it will be my lady that tickles my ear,
and it won't be a dream because she will always
be near, then my mind will be crystal clear and my
love will be mirrored, all because I had nothing but
faith that God would bring her here...

Author's Note

GOD IS GOOD!

Reviews

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

Very spring-like, hopeful. Your love is so close. She's coming!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, I appreciate it:)

[R Smith]

one day soon James i hope and believe your poems will be about your life with your soul mate, until then keep these magical words flowing out to her heart :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Haley Wilson]

Uplifting and inspiring! Always look forward to reading your stuff, doll. Xox

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Melinda McQueen]

Filled with emotion, hope and faith. Trusting in God always produces great blessings.
A great write.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A piece full of emotion and love and hope JT One observation, second stanza, first line 'The games my mind keep....' should be 'The games my mind keeps'

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your helpful hints, I appreciate it:)

[wordman]

from a memory to reality,great write james

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, RR me when you post new work:) b-blessed!

[wordman]

i will,your welcome

[Sophia]

I love the line "I will realize it was worth all of the waiting, but for
now I continue praying and anticipating", I think everyone has felt that way at some point. Great work, looking forward to reading more

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[free will]

I like your way of saying how you honestly feel. cos i.see it when i read it. ;)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Mitali Shah]

Good one Jamestown. Do keep your faith going. God bless :)

[Jamestown]

Always, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!