Tickles my ear...

Spring fever...

Tickles my ear...

The brisk spring breeze tickles my ear,
then a vision of my soul mate magically appears,
as my eyes then puddle with tears, her beauty all
of the sudden disappears,

The games my mind keep playing are no doubt
very draining, but longing for the love of my life
just keeps replaying, when we are finally together
I will realize it was worth all of the waiting, but for
now I continue praying and anticipating,

One day it will be my lady that tickles my ear,
and it won't be a dream because she will always
be near, then my mind will be crystal clear and my
love will be mirrored, all because I had nothing but
faith that God would bring her here...

Author's Note

GOD IS GOOD!

Reviews

[ANTO]

There's something about the word tickle that cause an involuntary smile in the reader my friend and that sense of fun and good humour will see you through. I love the assertion in the final stanza - your faith is unshakable and inspiring.
Well written poem of yearning but not desperation. Cool one JT !
:)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Jimmy Yetts]

Trusting in God for a soul-mate is not the modern way--which is why, of course, so many marriages now end in disaster.
Continue to stand; keep on trusting; your faith will be rewarded.
Because, as you say, God is good!

[Jamestown]

True! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Jesse]

Nice poem full of hope. That which one wishes often one will get....good luck Jamestown.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[mournful bear]

us, the faithful, are waiting for the day that THE LORD will bring that woman to our heart!

[Jamestown]

He always provides, PTL! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Lydia Shutter]

Filled with romantic longing. Whether the love of your love is just an image or a real person who lives far from you, the words are warm and loving. Sweet. Lydi**

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Gee]

Sweet write JT,hope life brings that which you seek,SOON...

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[Gee]

Youre welcome

[Pushkar Prabhat]

lovely..........beautiful poem......
one day sure that wish will come true..........
till then spring is not that bad.......
i loved it!!!
:)

[Jamestown]

I agree, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Valentine]

Yes...God is good and He does answer prayers. Just make sure you do not pass up a gem while looking for that special one. Valentine

[Jamestown]

Great advice:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[RomaJ]

Spring is such a beautiful time, filled with hope, new beginnings, and love in the air. sweet and lovely write, James. God always provides. Blessings

[Jamestown]

God is good! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Jamestown]

Great advice:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Lovely write my friend!
I really enjoyed it.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!