Peace & Goodbye...

Peace & Goodbye...

A Poem by Jamestown
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Break up...

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Peace & Goodbye...

Today I must cut ties with all the lies
you've been living in,

I can't pretend any longer,
I must grow stronger and move forward
in my life, without you and the strife,

I have given you the benefit of every single doubt
and every time I'm let down and alone to pout,

You and your lies have completely severed this tie
and I have no more tears to cry,

You have pushed me way to far this time
and I am positive that I don't want you to be mine,
So grab your stuff and get on the grind,

I hope all your lies were worth it
because you and I both know I didn't deserve them,
but they kept coming again and again
and today is the day that it all comes to an end,

I have to do what I have to do and your lies
made me hate you, I'm sick of this misery always blue,

Today I cut ties with you and your lies,
Peace & Goodbye...

© 2015 Jamestown


Author's Note

Jamestown
God is good, but break ups suck!

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Yeah break-ups are terrible...My boyfriend and I have broken up a few times and they all sucked so very much. For very similar reasons as you have written about here. We've been able to move on from them but that doesn't make it hurt any less when they did happen. I'm sorry you've had to deal with this, my friend, that isn't fair. I'm here if you want to talk! Thank you for sharing this with me :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

This happens oh well! Past experience I'm writing about here,
Thanks for checking it out and .. read more
There is a time just to pack up, pick up and go.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

You are absolutely right! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
And sometimes there is no where to go but away! Take what you learned (for I always think it's God giving us lessons) grow from it and move forward. A relationship built on lies is like a castle built on the sand doomed to crumble with the first crashing waves.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

I agree completely , thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
some time some people make us break apart and make us believe we are nothing, yet we are. life's a lesson go to class every day and you'll learn more for the final.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Absolutely, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
..lies are the reason for.breakups these days. I don't know why people have to lie. Nice piece great

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Yep,, sometimes you just have to say goodbye. It's not always easy but it has to be done. Gotta take the relationship for what it was and move on.



Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Completely agree! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Not something you usually write about, but a strong piece nonetheless. Very heartfelt and melancholy. Some people need to be let go of, as they are not honest with us and serve no purpose to be in our lives that way.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out, i appreciate it:) b-blessed!
Never hold on to lies. They only will make it worser. Very well said. :) Rudi

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

I agree, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
a very good and sensible poem.....!! Keep the good work up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jamestown

9 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

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Added on May 1, 2015
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Jamestown
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