Peace & Goodbye...

Break up...

Peace & Goodbye...

Today I must cut ties with all the lies
you've been living in,

I can't pretend any longer,
I must grow stronger and move forward
in my life, without you and the strife,

I have given you the benefit of every single doubt
and every time I'm let down and alone to pout,

You and your lies have completely severed this tie
and I have no more tears to cry,

You have pushed me way to far this time
and I am positive that I don't want you to be mine,
So grab your stuff and get on the grind,

I hope all your lies were worth it
because you and I both know I didn't deserve them,
but they kept coming again and again
and today is the day that it all comes to an end,

I have to do what I have to do and your lies
made me hate you, I'm sick of this misery always blue,

Today I cut ties with you and your lies,
Peace & Goodbye...

Author's Note

God is good, but break ups suck!

Reviews

[Nini]

Break ups do suck. This is nicely written though AND there comes a time for all of us that we just need to clean our house so to speak.

[Mai L Nissen]

Yeah, break ups suck! Even when the person you love turns out have never existed, the loss of who you think she was, hurts just as much! There is a lot of emotion in this poem, even if you 'have no more tears to cry,'. And a determination that I hope has made it easier to move on...? You deserve better!

Well written, thanks for sharing and hope you are alright!
Mai

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Lord_Shade]

Nothing destroys trusts like lies. But somewhere along the road someone will come along who will find it a challenge to lie to you. Thank you for sharing this deep poem.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[modtoddinc]

"Catching someone in one lie causes us to question everything they've said." Nice poetic justice here, wise and truthful.

~peace, Todd

[Jamestown]

I agree completely! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[nazia]

Sometimes all we can do is move on.. Its a wise decision to make.. Nice write :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[GreenEyedPoet]

All I could think about after read this was the song Jumper by Third Eyed Blind because of the lines
'cut ties with all the lies
you've been living in' lol.

Awesome write though James.

[Jamestown]

Great song good band and yes love that song,thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[GreenEyedPoet]

Is that where you got the line from? lol.

[W R Stowe]

Though we have been broken hearten it is wrong to hate we are commanded to love our enemies and pray for those whom despite fully use us hate the sin but love the sinner just always put matters of the heart in God's care stay strong in the Lord and wait upon his timing we tend to be impatient in these matters nice flow and rhythm here praying for you my young friend

Bill

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[W R Stowe]

you as well my young friend

[Chirag Kumar]

Awesome work. This one touches my heart :) Keep it up mate

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[King-Isah]

relationship suck when they are fueled with lies. love on the other side still prevails even when saying goodbye. nice poem thanks for sharing.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review b-blessed!

[King-Isah]

you welcome

[An owl on the moon]

Even in the pain of this sad goodbye, your heart exhibits a love and grace that is so often missing in relationships today... Yes... goodbye can be the most horrid, haunting word ever spoken...

[Jamestown]

I agree with this review, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!