CLOUD 9...

CLOUD 9...

I am definitely love struck,
I'm not even trying to pass the buck,

When I saw her love coming my way,
I tried to duck but she hit her target,
and now I'm stuck,

My head is no doubt in the clouds,
and I would be lying if I said I wasn't proud,
I feel completely blessed when she's around,
my girl is the epitome of being down,

So as we chill on cloud 9 and spend some,
quality time, kissing & hugging and hitting,
rewind, we indulge in our frenzy for one another,
growing closer playing the game of discover,

My heart is in a state of heavenly bliss,
the more & more we chill and kiss,

I want this trance to last forever,
I want her to be with me in all of my endeavors,
when we are together my life just feels better,
this is a tie I must be careful not to severe,

If it feels this good being with her and having my,
head stuck in the clouds, please God let me stay
on cloud 9, I don't ever want to come down...

Author's Note

GOD IS GOOD!!!
Just having fun, hope you enjoy:)

Reviews

[~]

Ahhh, those clouds are pretty and make us never want to walk this mortal earth ever again.
Beautiful sentiments in a lovely and romantic poem! :D

[Jamestown]

I agree completely! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Poet... Romance can be a discovery,
while hearts surrender. Your poetry is
like a hike up a mountain where clouds
dance against a blue sky and birds
sing a lullaby... May romance bring
shelter from the rain and always
bring contentment. truly ... Pat

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[rubie]

A fun and light-hearted write. The rhyme serves to intensify the playfulness.

Wonderful write!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Double T]

This is a very sweet poem with a big heart to it. You have written well.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[....................]

Love this piece very much James. It's so playful and honest in its sentiment. And, I love the rewind button: don't let it end; let it play over and over and over. Let's hope all this positive thought lands you on cloud 9!

[Jamestown]

It will all in due time:)
Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Tate Morgan]

Oh you got it bad lol real bad ride it out lol feminine whiles have put a spell on you

[Jamestown]

Just writings for now:( all in due time:)
Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Tate Morgan]

I liked it

[E G TEN]

An imaginative impression, of a love made in Heaven.
Simple words in loved, what a site! Thanks for sharing!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a few times i should have ducked...but that's another story...yes, this was fun...and i couldn't help singing to myself as i read it..."i'm doing fine, on Cloud 9"

j.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[nazia]

So you are in love with the idea of love.. What a fantastic state to be in :p (just joking)..
Heavenly bliss.... A joy to read :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Ashadan]

I like this poem. It started with the way how most people fall in love in a sort of passing in the process of mysterious way.Then it came into point of having those glorious moments wherein an in love person receive what love and world could offer. =)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Ashadan]

You are always welcome =)