CLOUD 9...

CLOUD 9...

I am definitely love struck,
I'm not even trying to pass the buck,

When I saw her love coming my way,
I tried to duck but she hit her target,
and now I'm stuck,

My head is no doubt in the clouds,
and I would be lying if I said I wasn't proud,
I feel completely blessed when she's around,
my girl is the epitome of being down,

So as we chill on cloud 9 and spend some,
quality time, kissing & hugging and hitting,
rewind, we indulge in our frenzy for one another,
growing closer playing the game of discover,

My heart is in a state of heavenly bliss,
the more & more we chill and kiss,

I want this trance to last forever,
I want her to be with me in all of my endeavors,
when we are together my life just feels better,
this is a tie I must be careful not to severe,

If it feels this good being with her and having my,
head stuck in the clouds, please God let me stay
on cloud 9, I don't ever want to come down...

Author's Note

GOD IS GOOD!!!
Just having fun, hope you enjoy:)

Reviews

[Frozen Eyes]

romantic & refreshing.. good one James :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[A. H. Pinley]

When love was new and a foreign concept then you receive love and give it. Nice piece!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[jeannemarie coulter]

a fun read and clean write...much enjoyed

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Masoom Nasiha Hussain]

its different!!! a gud one :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Masoom Nasiha Hussain]

My pleasure :)

[Shawna]

Great poem! I enjoyed this quite a bit! :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Mai L Nissen]

What an enjoyable read :) I am feeling lighter just reading it! I can see I have got a lot of catching up to do - as always, you have been very productive!

[Jamestown]

Thanks again and b-blessed!

[Arunima]

AWWWWW...romantic but in a different way...:)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed my new friend:)

[Arunima]

Anytime.friend..

[Miss Sharon]

Sounds like a plan to me! Cloud 9 would be a lovely way to spend an evening or a lifetime. ~Sharon

[Jamestown]

I agree:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Avinash]

Long live romance. I have not seen you visiting this territory much. But it made a pleasant read.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Nadia B.]

God is Good, Amen! You make Cloud 9 sound like paradise, in fact while reading I pictured two little angels sitting on a cloud being so happily in Love, and sharing that with God, not wanting it to ever go away. Thank you for sharing this little piece of heaven, please keep writing and God bless!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!