Midnight Snack...

Midnight Snack...

Yum Yum!!!
I love my midnight snack,

So many delicious little treats
to satisfy one's sweet tooth,

Ice cream
Pie
Chocolate cake
Fudge
Popcorn

And the list goes on and on,
but since you and I have been an item,

My favorite midnight snack is you
sweetie pie, there's no doubt about it,

You are as sweet as they come and I
have never went to bed feeling my midnight
craving unsatisfied...

Author's Note

Having fun, hope you enjoy:)

Reviews

[Haley Wilson]

Playful and silly! I have a HUUUGE sweet tooth myself and reading this makes me want to have chocolate haha. Good work as usual!

[Jamestown]

Thanks that's what I was going for :) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Tom McRoberts]

This is a really sweet piece. Right of the start with "Yum Yum" it's immediately playful. Perhaps this could be developed even further by finding some phrase to facilitate the twist, after the snacks, the reveal it is her? A joke maybe, to keep a constant feel of play throughout the piece? "Sweetie pie" was a clever choice and links really well though. Great stuff, keep it up!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed.

[....................]

The snack that keeps on filling the heart's cravings... a great write, James!

[Jamestown]

Absolutely, thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[FJ Davis]

A delightful ditty praising an apparently equally delightful gal.
Enjoyed the smart, upbeat read, Jamestown.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[fattycbreezy52]

aaawwwwwwwwww.This is what I call I a cute poem.Finally a moment of respite from some grim substance and serious poets;D

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Ishita Dixit]

This was so cute James!
I loved the idea of relating love with a midnight snack!
Awesome! :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[alf]

Hi James. I so love this. Risqué and romantic!! A delight to read and leaves a provocative niggle in the mind!!! So good!! alf

[Jamestown]

Thanks my friend, just having a little fun:)

[alf]

I was so astounded!!! I did truly find this entertaining and just that little side of naughty!!!

[Jamestown]

It actually came about from a saying I have used since I was younger,
I saw a nice looking lady this evening and said to my cousin, I would
eat her up with a spoon:) lol

[alf]

yep, I can relate to that!! I love this relaxed style, I think the first I have seen from you, and I kind of think it shows the softer side of your personality.

[AaronFreitas]

That sounds delicious! I just did a home made salsa for myself! haha good work!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, and b-blessed!