A Blur...

Longing for Love...

A Blur...

Today is not my best day
I want the ache in my heart to go away,

I completely long to be strong in love again
I feel my thoughts of my lady just blowing in
the wind,

I can visualize her
I can smell her
I can almost feel her

My vision and emotions are so clear
then a moment later they just disappear, (a blur)

I am confused why my love must be detoured
I am becoming frustrated and it's quite absurd,

She awaits me as I for her finding my lady is a game
of cat and mouse, I game I am getting tired of playing
but if it means capturing the love of my life I will continue
waiting,

I know I must be patient but today my patients are at wit's
end and I so badly want my new life of love to begin,

Some men and women think it's okay to have 2 or 3
but I just want 1 to love have and hold just her and me,

Oh well, when the timing is right everything will fall in it's place
but for now I'll just pace, Lord I know that I'm a disgrace
but if you send me my lady, I promise to win life's race

I can visualize her
I can smell her
I can almost feel her

I beg of you Lord, please let her not be just a blur
I want her, I need her, that is for sure...

Author's Note

God is good!
I must be patient and humble:)
Hope you enjoy...

Reviews

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Nice piece of writing, James. We always have to hope, without hope there's nothing left I guess. Thank you for sharing. :) Rudi

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[fattycbreezy52]

Amazing.Contains a great amount of aesthetic elements and sensory perception.As if all your sense organs are responding to that lady love.I do not know about its fulfillment but can hope for it.THe choice of having just one over those fickle 2-3 makes it outstanding and worth reading

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review b-blessed!

[Tori]

Really nice piece of art, i enjoyed reading this. Love will always find a way to find you.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review b-blessed!

[Madhu]

I can sure relate to it, and these thoughts get over powered on the Valentine's Day! It's a very sweet explanation and a very well written prayer-poem to God. I hope you find her soon. :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review b-blessed

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

When you stop chasing love and waiting on it is when love comes to you freely like a butterfly. And it is a fact. I've experienced it as have many others. Be patient my friend, like you said. When the right time comes, you will be blessed with your one and only. There's no other way.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review b-blessed,

[armin]

Blur, an unusual theme Jimmy haven't read anything like that yet.
I can feel, relate to the prayers and longing.
Good one.

armin. ...

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[R Smith]

excellent writing James, almost comes over as a prayer to God, i'm sure you'll be heard, the wait will soon be over :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review b-blessed!

[W R Stowe]

When I surrendered all to Christ soon after My wife had come into my life just await upon God it will be but believe and visualize good luck bro

Bill

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed! PTL

[W R Stowe]

your quite welcome God bless

Bill

[nazia]

Your inclination towards the romantics is working wonders for the readers like me. I do hope she is not just a blur. amazing work. The way you wrote
I can visualize her
I can smell her
I can almost feel her
made her so real. Loved it :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[~]

Oh james, hang in there, the clouds will clear out. I loved the way how your sentiments are loud and clear, and as usual written from the heart. Prayers for you, sent up there :):)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out my sweet friend, I appreciate it:)
b-blessed!