A Blur...

Longing for Love...

A Blur...

Today is not my best day
I want the ache in my heart to go away,

I completely long to be strong in love again
I feel my thoughts of my lady just blowing in
the wind,

I can visualize her
I can smell her
I can almost feel her

My vision and emotions are so clear
then a moment later they just disappear, (a blur)

I am confused why my love must be detoured
I am becoming frustrated and it's quite absurd,

She awaits me as I for her finding my lady is a game
of cat and mouse, I game I am getting tired of playing
but if it means capturing the love of my life I will continue
waiting,

I know I must be patient but today my patients are at wit's
end and I so badly want my new life of love to begin,

Some men and women think it's okay to have 2 or 3
but I just want 1 to love have and hold just her and me,

Oh well, when the timing is right everything will fall in it's place
but for now I'll just pace, Lord I know that I'm a disgrace
but if you send me my lady, I promise to win life's race

I can visualize her
I can smell her
I can almost feel her

I beg of you Lord, please let her not be just a blur
I want her, I need her, that is for sure...

Author's Note

God is good!
I must be patient and humble:)
Hope you enjoy...

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

The romantic longing in the poem is intense. Well written, James. Lydi**

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Miss Sharon]

Nicely written my friend. And may the Lord send that special lady into your life very soon. ~Sharon

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Miss Sharon]

You are so welcome my friend! ~SP

[B]

So sweet
Wishing she wont be a blur

love this alot

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Mara]

This is a beautiful piece:)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[BLACKCRUSH]

Great write. Shows your beautiful heart :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[613]

I believe you're missing the word "my" here: "Today is not my best day I want the ache in (MY) heart to go away,"; also, there are a few grammatical errors.

But overall, I really enjoyed this poem. Very nice job.

- Brittney

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your helpful hints, I appreciate it b-blessed to

[613]

Sure thing! I look forward to reading more from you. (& thank you again!)

[Nodz]

As the saying goes "Great things come to those who wait" God hears and listen and His timing is always perfect :) beautiful poem

[Jamestown]

True,thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Darkevin]

I hope that you can find this "God" easier than I.
I enjoyed this poem. I, TOO... would love to feel the arms of love envelope me.
Keep up the good work.
Kevin

[Jamestown]

All in due time:) Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Darkevin]

Try my "hey God... gotta minute!"

[Jamestown]

Sure just message me.

[Blotted Ink Productions]

It's the worst feeling in the world...waiting for anything. Especially a woman. You captured that perfectly in this writing. Great job.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Desert Knave]

Wow. Great sentiments that touch a chord with me. It is amazing how for just a moment we can almost touch a person in our thoughts ... and then, just like that, they are gone. An excellent write. ~Jim

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!